Reviewer: shan21 Signed
Date: February 28, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ahhhhhhhh! I read this a while back but I must have fainted from the sheer awesomeness of it, because I never reviewed. (and that's just inexcusable!)
Okay, I'm about to quote a big chunk of this, 'cause that's just how I am. This here:
But you'd misinterpreted. You'd misinterpreted something so basic in your understanding of the world and all of a sudden the sky was violet and the grass was red. Dwight was pleasant and you knew nothing.
So you ran.
Because, really, what else can you do when the sky could fall on you at any minute?
Is some damn fine writing. The whole thing flows so beautifully and effortlessly. It's stream of consciousness, but it's not messy. It's perfect. Such a good explanation of what was going on in Jim's mind.
Oh, and lest I forget the ending let me just say HOLY COW. So beautiful. Can't compliment this enough.