Lovely, lovely, lovely. My favorite lines are easily: "Stop snorting cocaine and read to your child once in awhile ok? Jeez. So tired of this." and "Let's make out." I love all your little lines for Jim to use in place of "sincerely." I think you're doing a fine job here and, frankly, you should fastforward a year or two so they can have another baby and start the story all over again! 

Great work! -CH

This story is so beautiful and poetic. I'm just loving every minute of it! I can't wait to see how you put these two together (PLEASE tell me that's the outcome you've got in mind, because I can barely sit still for thinking about how you could do it!)!  --CH

Author's Response: Well, the story will follow the progression of season three. Wherever the finale leaves off, I'll pick up from there and finish...

fasterthansnakes--I've stumbled upon this a long time after you originally posted it, but I'm loving it! Can't wati to move on to the next chapter! -CH

Vaughnlove, I'm enjoying this and your take on Fancy New Beesly. I can't wait to see where this goes next and I think a doorstep moment would be in order. Jim should go find Pam, especially if you've finally given her the guts she needs to, as you said, step up!

And, erm, Vaughn, I wrote "Inconvenient Truth." :)

Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the great work!
C.

VL, I'm going to have Dwight Shrute come after you for slacking off on the job since you've not written another chapter of this. In case you forgot how ch2 ended "Pam exhaled slowly, putting her clothes back in order. This was going to be fun." NEXT CHAPTER, ASAP, or this will be reflected in your next performance review!!! --CH  

Lovely; this was so tastefully done and full of the tension that makes fanfiction fabulous. I've enjoyed this story from the start and can't wait for more! --C.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought it was tasteful!  I joke, but there is something terribly personal about writing (and posting - god help me) smutty stuff.  So it's good to hear that it doesn't come off as gratuitous or cheap.  THanks so much for reviewing!

This is so good! I can't wait to see where you take it next!

Fabulous and wonderful as usual; can't wait for more!

Will you name my review "President Thomas Jefferson" or something cool like that? :)

I just love this story; I literally put down what I was doing (which was studying for a rather important test!) when I saw you'd posted a new chapter. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Oh no! I hope you pass your test, Becky! But hey, I'm glad that you like my story that much :) I'm constantly on MTT when I should be doing work. It's an addiction.

Misao--

  Charming and elegant. I avoided it at first, being horrified that it might be a Karim piece, but I am so impressed with how you wrote this and the clever development of the one character I love to hate. You really brought Karen to life here, and I think you did a fabulous job. Keep up the great work; can't wait to read more from you!

CH

YEY!!!!!!!!!! Jim revealed! I can't wait for more Moxie, especially to find out how she knew it was him! --CH

Moxie, I'm just loving this story (as I told you on OT earlier today). I can't wait to see where this goes next; the concept is so innovative and I love your insight into the characters. Keep up the great work!