Penname: Becky215 Real name: CH
Member Since: February 21, 2007
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Reply by falldownmore Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 4
Summary: Just my take on what the text message said. Spoilers for Diwali!

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1185 Read Count: 1891 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2006 Updated: November 02, 2006
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: March 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story! That text message has been bothering me ever since "Diwali," and I think you handled this beautifully and very realistically. I laughed aloud at Jim's response; very in-character and charming. Nicely done!  --C.

Baby Talk by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 438] 116
Summary:

More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96586 Read Count: 145958 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2006 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: May 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Mother's Day

Lovely, lovely, lovely. My favorite lines are easily: "Stop snorting cocaine and read to your child once in awhile ok? Jeez. So tired of this." and "Let's make out." I love all your little lines for Jim to use in place of "sincerely." I think you're doing a fine job here and, frankly, you should fastforward a year or two so they can have another baby and start the story all over again! 

Great work! -CH



Author's Response: haha, start the story all over again huh? lol. Obviously from that one entry where they had a bit of a pregnancy scare, I thought about it. lol. But I think I will have to start thinking soon about what else I can write about their little family...what moment in time, etc. SO glad to hear what your favorite lines are - I LOVE when people tell me exactly what parts they dug.  Thanks so much for the review Becky215!

Summary:

A series of drabbles, set after Back From Vacation (with some slight spoilers) and deviating from there. Pam makes Jim face the same difficult decision (and consequences) that she had to deal with.

Each drabble is 100 words according to MS Word, so if the summary says otherwise...it's lying. :0)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9891 Read Count: 277541 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2007 Updated: February 23, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 90: Direction

I am loving this! Keep up the fabulous work.

Summary: Maybe it was just growth. Forward and back. Inescapable.

 

Series about the aftermath of Casino Night and the developments of Season 3. Episode related from alternating points of view. Excuse the stream of consciousness... Spoilers through most recent episode.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drabble
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12897 Read Count: 75599 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2007 Updated: June 12, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Jim

This story is so beautiful and poetic. I'm just loving every minute of it! I can't wait to see how you put these two together (PLEASE tell me that's the outcome you've got in mind, because I can barely sit still for thinking about how you could do it!)!  --CH

Author's Response: Well, the story will follow the progression of season three. Wherever the finale leaves off, I'll pick up from there and finish...

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 30: Jim

I love this chapter--you did a wonderful job showing the inner turmoil we know Jim is feeling, and I agree that part of him (even if he doesn't want to admit it) still does the pranks for Pam's benefit.

The Fine Work Award goes to you!  -CH



Author's Response: Hahaha... I love it. And thank you. :)

Summary: It's been a year since Casino night, Pam decides to finally give up on Jim and move on....literally. Spoilers through Phyllis' Wedding and a tiny spoiler/speculation about what goes down in Business School.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7437 Read Count: 10885 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2007 Updated: February 12, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Telling him

fasterthansnakes--I've stumbled upon this a long time after you originally posted it, but I'm loving it! Can't wati to move on to the next chapter! -CH

Blood by HereComesTreble Rated: T [Reviews - 13] 7
Summary: What I'd like to happen on valentines day.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3104 Read Count: 2707 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2007 Updated: February 10, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why Pam is so much better than Karen

What a great story! Some folks over in the OT chat room recommended it, and I am so happy they did. A very charming story, and I loved your characterization of Karen. Too many people make her a lovely/sweet character, and I think you hit the nail right on the head.

Great story; I look forward to more of your stories!

Summary: Pam finally grows a pair.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1703 Read Count: 3491 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2007 Updated: March 13, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward

Vaughnlove, I'm enjoying this and your take on Fancy New Beesly. I can't wait to see where this goes next and I think a doorstep moment would be in order. Jim should go find Pam, especially if you've finally given her the guts she needs to, as you said, step up!

And, erm, Vaughn, I wrote "Inconvenient Truth." :)

Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the great work!
C.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry, Vaughn, had to come back for one more little note. I LOVE the way you end this chater. It's just such a powerful moment that I hope Pam might someday get on the show. Thanks for delightfully blurring the line between "Office reality" and fanfic!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Stepping Forward

VL, I'm going to have Dwight Shrute come after you for slacking off on the job since you've not written another chapter of this. In case you forgot how ch2 ended "Pam exhaled slowly, putting her clothes back in order. This was going to be fun." NEXT CHAPTER, ASAP, or this will be reflected in your next performance review!!! --CH  

A Message by Peskipiksi Rated: T [Reviews - 27] 11
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam calls Jim to warn him about Roy.  Takes place immediately after Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1172 Read Count: 5835 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Warning

Very nice work! I can definitely see it all happening this way. I hope you continue!

Elsewhere by girl7 Rated: MA [Reviews - 195] 50
Summary:

Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31449 Read Count: 93933 ePub Downloads: 17
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Lovely; this was so tastefully done and full of the tension that makes fanfiction fabulous. I've enjoyed this story from the start and can't wait for more! --C.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought it was tasteful!  I joke, but there is something terribly personal about writing (and posting - god help me) smutty stuff.  So it's good to hear that it doesn't come off as gratuitous or cheap.  THanks so much for reviewing!

Summary: Pam's trying to deal with the aftermath of Cocktails (so spoilers through Cocktails of course).  Hopefully, through all the fear they will find each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12314 Read Count: 54990 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2007 Updated: March 19, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: The Happy Ending

Easily one of my favorite post-Cocktails stories. Great job!!

Author's Response:

Seriously?!?  AWWWWW!  Thank you so very much.  I am really honored that you like it.  And very happy that you enjoyed it!



Author's Response: BTW, Just looked you up and realized that you wrote Stuffing Envelopes, which I just adore!!!

Party Fouls by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 60] 19
Summary: Past Featured Story

The aftermath of Cocktails (NOT part of my AU universe).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Jim To The Rescue
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6251 Read Count: 30094 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2007 Updated: March 03, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Stirred

This is so good! I can't wait to see where you take it next!

Summary: Pam has friends in many interesting places. And who ever imagined Dwight as Cupid? Spoilers through Cocktails
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3675 Read Count: 4980 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like how you wove Dwight into this equation. Fun story!

Author's Response: oh, thanks!  I really think dwight needs to be developed more - both in fanfic and in the show!

Summary: Past Featured StoryYup, it’s a post-Cocktails fic! With a bit of a twist. Karen does a bad thing, and Jim is about to suffer the consequences…
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy
Genres: Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31515 Read Count: 106370 ePub Downloads: 19
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Questions and Answers

Fabulous and wonderful as usual; can't wait for more!

Will you name my review "President Thomas Jefferson" or something cool like that? :)



Author's Response: Thanks Becky! And consider it done. Mr. President has his own little name plate (think Kelly's from Christmas Party--with little pastel flowers and everything)

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Burn

I just love this story; I literally put down what I was doing (which was studying for a rather important test!) when I saw you'd posted a new chapter. Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Oh no! I hope you pass your test, Becky! But hey, I'm glad that you like my story that much :) I'm constantly on MTT when I should be doing work. It's an addiction.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Consequences

Love this chapter! The passion and broken sentences at the end when Jim comes back? Amazing! Can't wait for more! --CH

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Great conclusion--I love the description, and Kelly's "longest word in the English language" was hilarious! Well done!

-CH

Summary: Three-part series detailing three times Pam stayed over at Karen's and realized something new.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Karen, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5600 Read Count: 7385 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Mind

Misao--

  Charming and elegant. I avoided it at first, being horrified that it might be a Karim piece, but I am so impressed with how you wrote this and the clever development of the one character I love to hate. You really brought Karen to life here, and I think you did a fabulous job. Keep up the great work; can't wait to read more from you!

CH

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 250282 ePub Downloads: 56
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet

Moxie, I'm just loving this story (as I told you on OT earlier today). I can't wait to see where this goes next; the concept is so innovative and I love your insight into the characters. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Oh, Moxie, what can be said!? I was halfway through my 2:00 class today when I remembered you said you'd be posting a new chapter, and admittedly that put an extra spring in my step as I hurried home. And of course you did not disappoint! I can't wait for more and to find out just when Jim will tell Pam that he is Squirrel so they can take off their McPants. Haha

Keep it up--you always leave us wanting more (twss!) --CH

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Time to turn back and descend the stair

LOVE the last few lines here--just great. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: For I have known them all already, known them all

YEY!!!!!!!!!! Jim revealed! I can't wait for more Moxie, especially to find out how she knew it was him! --CH

Farewell by BeckySue Rated: K [Reviews - 44] 10
Summary:

“Pam? Well, we are more like acquaintances now. She does her own thing and I do mine. It’s best this way if you think about it,”  Jim said into the camera.

Pam is leaving Dunder Mifflin. Where do Jim and Pam stand before her departure?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10696 Read Count: 10230 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2007 Updated: March 25, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Goodness, BeckySue, your story makes me want to curl up and watch the UK version just so I can see what happens! This is so great and heart-breaking, I can hardly wait to see what happens next!