Summary: It’s generous and thoughtful, which makes him feel like a jerk when all he can think about is that damn bag. That bag that now looks cast aside as is the case with the other parts of his other life.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1141 Read Count: 5860 ePub Downloads: 0
Penname: Becky215 Real name: CH
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[Report This] Published: May 21, 2007 Updated: May 21, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: May 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Other
Author's Response: Fine Work Award? It's not a blue ribbon (only the cool people get those) but I'll take it! Seriously, it means so much to have a review like that from you since I'm such a geektastic fan of your work. I'm so glad that you liked this story and thank you again for reading, darlin!
Date: May 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Other
And he tries to laugh, but the word “artist” hurts a bit and the briefcase is getting increasingly heavier.
AND
“Well, I’m ready when you are,” he said, slinging the brown bag over his shoulder, the strap getting tangled around his arm since he’s seemed to have lost all coordination since she said yes.
Fabulous lines, Miss Wendy/Sway! I love the perspective you've taken here, and even the little details about Jim's day-to-day seem right on the mark. This was such a sweet story, and you really excelled in matching the tone of the finale. Fine Work Award to you, Sway!!!
CH
Author's Response: Fine Work Award? It's not a blue ribbon (only the cool people get those) but I'll take it! Seriously, it means so much to have a review like that from you since I'm such a geektastic fan of your work. I'm so glad that you liked this story and thank you again for reading, darlin!
Summary: 
Jim is nervous about their first date. Spoilers through "The Job".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256 Read Count: 5290 ePub Downloads: 0
Jim is nervous about their first date. Spoilers through "The Job".Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256 Read Count: 5290 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2007 Updated: May 23, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 
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Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Perfectly charming. I can see this as a cold open to the season 4 premiere; if I'm right, and you've predicted the future, we can look forward to a wonderful season. Great job with the dialogue and details; tihs is simply lovely. -CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed (I've only correctly predicted the future once in fic, and that was Pam leaving Phyllis's wedding with Roy, so...let's hope for better in season 4!).
Summary: Friday morning. His first date with Pam behind him. Jim is confronted by the last remaining loose end.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Andy, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1003 Read Count: 3427 ePub Downloads: 2
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Andy, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1003 Read Count: 3427 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2007 Updated: May 23, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Final Act
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm so glad you keyed in on Karen's bear -- I like to get hung up on inane little details that illustrate bigger things.
10 Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Final Act
I really liked this! Andy's role in the charade was a perfect surprise, and I was thoroughly entertained by your imagery and the way you used the language to convey the story. My favorite lines, however, are these...
"She put that stupid little bear on her desk because it made her happy. Now the little bastard was staring at Jim, trying to ruin his sweet afterglow."
AND
"Dunder Mifflin could go fuck itself."
This was a refreshing take on the now very popular post-"The Job" storyline. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm so glad you keyed in on Karen's bear -- I like to get hung up on inane little details that illustrate bigger things.
Summary:
Categories: Other
Characters: Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 875 Read Count: 2023 ePub Downloads: 0
"I call it Pam Pong. I count how many times Jim gets up from his desk and goes to reception to talk to you. "
Categories: Other
Characters: Pam/Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 875 Read Count: 2023 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: coffee pong
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: coffee pong
What a fun twist at the end! I read this thinking it was Jima the whole time, but what a treat to see such a different side of Trusty Toby. Well done!
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 702 Read Count: 3095 ePub Downloads: 0
This oneshot is based on a prompt at TWoP to write a fic based on a screen shot from Gay Witch Hunt showing that Jim has a note stuck to his monitor reading, "Smile!" This is what I imagine he was thinking when he looked at it. Oh, so, spoilers for Gay Witch Hunt, sort of.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 702 Read Count: 3095 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: May 26, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: from the inside out
Author's Response: SQUEE! Thank you so much for the review, Becky! And I'm glad you liked the semi-ambiguous ending. I kind of like endings like that, but I never know if other people will. Don't worry, I won't answer your question. :)
10 Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: from the inside out
Oh, invis, that was simply breathtaking. I never noticed that post-it in all my viewings of "Gay Witch Hunt" (one of my favorite eps of the season), but it really does say a lot about Jim's character at this point in the series. You did a beautiful job capturing his efforts toward growth but the simultaneous limits placed upon it. I simply love how you ended the story because, for me at least, it was a bit ambiguous. Is he throwing it away because he's smiling that she's not married or throwing it away because he can't smile over everything he's lost? Don't answer this question; it's just a perfect ending.
I especially liked this line: The person who’d notice his missing smile and try to bring it back is…not here. He looks at the note. He keeps practicing.
Excellent work, here. A thumbs up, ten points, and a gold star for your efforts!
Author's Response: SQUEE! Thank you so much for the review, Becky! And I'm glad you liked the semi-ambiguous ending. I kind of like endings like that, but I never know if other people will. Don't worry, I won't answer your question. :)
Summary: A series of vignettes centered around clichés, but with a JAM spin.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10899 Read Count: 41838 ePub Downloads: 0
A series of vignettes centered around clichés, but with a JAM spin.Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10899 Read Count: 41838 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2007 Updated: July 22, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: A Matter of Life and Death
10 Date: May 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: A Matter of Life and Death
Lovely, lovely, lovely, as per usual. Can't wait for the next installment!!
Author's Response: Thank you my dear :) Couldn't have done it without you!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: June 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Back to the Drawing Board
Author's Response: Oh GMMBBG, how I adore your cheerleading :) It felt so good to post this and I couldn't have done it without all of your ra-raing. Muchos gracias for everything mi amiga!
10 Date: June 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Back to the Drawing Board
Okay, so, yeah. I thought the highlight of today would be the arrival of my "Moonlighting" dvds on Netflix. Then I hop onto MTT for a routine story check and see this story from out of the blue (the Wendy Blue!). THEN I discover that it's easily my favorite chapter of the series thus far (even though I say that with every installment). This one takes the cake with it's rockin' "Gone with the Wind" references (you must have known that would win my heart!), the seamless dialogue, and your best integration of the cliches yet. All the previous chapters have been fabulous in their subtleties, but this one was simply genius. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, my dear! Your writer's block is most definitely a thing of the past!
GMMBBG
Author's Response: Oh GMMBBG, how I adore your cheerleading :) It felt so good to post this and I couldn't have done it without all of your ra-raing. Muchos gracias for everything mi amiga!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: You Complete Me
Author's Response:
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: You Complete Me
Lovely, as usual. You handled the ever-difficult task of writing Dwight and Angela beautifully. Another wonderful chapter to a wonderful story!!
Author's Response:
Thanks darlin' (I stole your word, hope you don't mind) and thanks so much for all your help last night!
P.S. You did not sign your review properly.
--SHWOP
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Diamonds Are a Girl's Best Friend
Author's Response: You know, you have consistently been the first to review for every chapter. You are speedy, my dear, and thank you so much for all the kind words about the story! Thanks for being such a great fanfic partner-in-crime as well as a great friend.--SHWOP
10 Date: May 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Diamonds Are a Girl's Best Friend
Lovely, lovely, lovely, as always. I love how you make us think you're talking about a ring in the beginning (you tease, you), and your description of little Miss Halpert is simply precious. You've wowed me again with your spot-on Jim/Pam banter, and the humor in this was the perfect mix of fluff and romance. Another wonderful job; I've said it once and I'll say it again: you continue to top yourself with each passing chapter, so this story might have to go on forever so we can enjoy your creativity and the intricacies.
Go start chapter 6. --GMMBBG
Author's Response: You know, you have consistently been the first to review for every chapter. You are speedy, my dear, and thank you so much for all the kind words about the story! Thanks for being such a great fanfic partner-in-crime as well as a great friend.--SHWOP
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Blind Leading the Blind
Author's Response: Always so quick to review, CH, I love it! Like I said, this story wouldn't even exist without your help, so thank you sooo much for all your help. And I'm so glad you liked the chapter! See you around our four mediums of communication ;)
10 Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Blind Leading the Blind
You've topped chapter one, dear Sway, and I didn't think that was possible! I love the little subtleties you put in your work, and the last paragraph of this chapter is pure delight. It might sound cliche, but keep 'em coming!!! --CH
Author's Response: Always so quick to review, CH, I love it! Like I said, this story wouldn't even exist without your help, so thank you sooo much for all your help. And I'm so glad you liked the chapter! See you around our four mediums of communication ;)
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: "My Way or the Highway"
10 Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: "My Way or the Highway"
Oh, lovely, Sway, simply lovely! You captured that moment when she says, "I love you" so perfectly, and I think it's breathtaking you you made her so willing to compromise after he said those simple words in return. A Dundie to you, Sway, for a wonderful start to what promises to be a fabulous story. I know it might sound cliche, but is there more where that came from? --CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much, my dear! I realized that I have to go back and thank you in my story notes for being not just a fabulous beta, but being fabulous in general. Thank you so much for all your support of this story, and there's plenty more where it came from! Can't thank you enough darlin :)
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore
Author's Response: Thank you my dear! As always, couldn't have done it without you kicking me in the ass and telling me to just update already ;) Muchos gracias senorita.
Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Think We're in Kansas Anymore
Tra la, tra la--so lovely I just can't stand it!! I really think this is my favorite chapter of the bunch. They just get better and better (is that a cliche? It might be...)
My favorite part?: “Less attitude and more swaying, Beesly.”
“I thought this was dancing.”
“You talk too much.”
*************
Lovely work here, my friend. Can't wait for more!! -CH
Author's Response: Thank you my dear! As always, couldn't have done it without you kicking me in the ass and telling me to just update already ;) Muchos gracias senorita.
Summary: Pam changes outfits- and herself. Speculative post-The Job.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10447 Read Count: 62005 ePub Downloads: 14
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10447 Read Count: 62005 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: March 15, 2017
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: June 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: I managed while you were gone
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! "Simple elegance" is such a lovely compliment- you can't see me, but I'm smiling and blushing right now. I'm so glad you are enjoying it!
Date: June 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: I managed while you were gone
This is so charming, nqllisi! I'm only sorry it's taken me so long to discover it; I'm loving every chapter, and the simple elegance of your writing is a real treat. Looking forward to more! --CH
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! "Simple elegance" is such a lovely compliment- you can't see me, but I'm smiling and blushing right now. I'm so glad you are enjoying it!
Summary: You know, this would not happen if we had a union. A season two a/u.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11941 Read Count: 32849 ePub Downloads: 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11941 Read Count: 32849 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: June 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad to hear you're liking it. :) And yeah, I think the whole situation is so much more realistic and interesting (and sad) if he's not an evil guy, he's just the *wrong* guy.
Date: June 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
My regret of the day is that it's taken me so long to discover this story! I'm enjoying it so much. You're really tackled the AU frontier with style and creativity, and I'm loving every bit of this. You also write Roy really well, which I always appreciate in a story; so many folks are tempted to make him a 2-dimensional jerk, but you've given him the kind of depth that helps us understand why they were together in the first place.
This scene on the roof was powerful and perfect. I can't wait to click "next" so I can read the next chapter! --CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad to hear you're liking it. :) And yeah, I think the whole situation is so much more realistic and interesting (and sad) if he's not an evil guy, he's just the *wrong* guy.
Five People Who Find Out That Jim And Pam Are Doin' It by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: T [Reviews - 54] 16
16 Summary: Jim and Pam think they are keeping a secret.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4754 Read Count: 28821 ePub Downloads: 1
Jim and Pam think they are keeping a secret.Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4754 Read Count: 28821 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2007 Updated: June 14, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Toby
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Toby
I'm really enjoying this story! You've done a great job capturing secondary-characters (excellent work on Kelly!), and I look forward to the other two installments of the piece. Nice job!!
Summary: Was Pam entirely truthful in The Secret when Jim confessed his "old" crush? This is how I would have liked it to go.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56 Read Count: 3404 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56 Read Count: 3404 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2007 Updated: July 08, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: April 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tell The Real Truth, Pam
Author's Response:
10 Date: April 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tell The Real Truth, Pam
Lovely. I'm upset with myself for not having read this sooner. Wonderful work, really, TLK. I love your style.
--Never Acquiesce, CH
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, CH. It's so sweet of you; you've put a big smile on my face. :) (It's bigger than that little teeny smile I just typed, though.)
The video was really neat. Can you believe I've never seen Les Miz? True.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Becky215! It helps. ;)
Summary: Jim answers the question of where he sees himself in ten years.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: David Wallace, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8070 Read Count: 5489 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: David Wallace, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8070 Read Count: 5489 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: September 20, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
8 Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This is a lovely take on that first date. I'm crazy about the last few paragraphs, and I think you really hit your stride in the middle of this chapter. I can't wait for more! --CH
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8782 Read Count: 69200 ePub Downloads: 2
This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8782 Read Count: 69200 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: I Love...Everything
9 Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: I Love...Everything
I love this story so much, LoveFool. You've done a brilliant job capturing those almost-awkward-but-still-fabulous moments between them. Keep the chapters coming! --CH
Author's Response: Thanks so much Becky! So glad you're enjoying the story so much! It was a lot of fun getting back to it.
Summary: Something is going on between Jim Halpert and Pam Beesly.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Roy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13550 Read Count: 61059 ePub Downloads: 4
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Roy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13550 Read Count: 61059 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2007 Updated: February 23, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Alive
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Alive
This is very charming, Beeswax! I just reread the whole story and enjoyed every word. Great job (love the dialogue!), and I can't wait for more! --CH
Author's Response:
Wow!!! You don't know how honoured I feel to get a review from you! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my little story. I am in complete awe of your talent!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: I'll See You on the Beach
Date: February 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: I'll See You on the Beach
Perfect, Bees. You addressed the ball, swung the bat, and knocked it out of the park. This is such a lovely conclusion to a wonderful story; the Fine Work Award Dundie and ten Stanley Nickels to you, my friend! --CH
Author's Response:
Well, thank you, Oh Mighty Beta! I will split my Stanley Nickels with you and maybe we can trade them in for flying unicorns and fly away together over the rainbow.
Seriously, again, a million thanks.
Summary: A series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod. No chronological order, so sit tight. It might be a bumpy ride through time.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13152 Read Count: 78973 ePub Downloads: 5
A series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod. No chronological order, so sit tight. It might be a bumpy ride through time.Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13152 Read Count: 78973 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2007 Updated: November 11, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Give Me One Reason
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Give Me One Reason
Sweetpea---Goodness gracious, I don't know what's taken me so long to discover this story!! You write with such lovely imagery that it's impossible to stop reading. I usually keep my distance from songfics, but you've done such a beautiful job using the music to guide your stories. I'm enjoying all these chapters, and I can't wait for more! -CH
Author's Response:
I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy! Reading this was the highlight of my day, CH. I've had so much fun writing these chapters, but reading reviews has been even more fun. I'm so pleased that you read and reviewed. Thank you!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Steady As We Go
10 Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Steady As We Go
This whole story was lovely, but this last chapter might be the sweetest note of all. Your description of Jim has turned me to jello (!), and I've loved every word of this story. Well done! --CH
Author's Response: CH, I can't tell you how great this makes me feel. I haven't written anything in years and writing this story has been like being reunited with an old friend. We're still getting to know each other again and the relationship isn't as smooth as it could be, but when I read your stories I'm inspired to keep doing it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: We Belong Together
Author's Response: LOL! Great...who am I to argue with that logic, CH? There were a few mornings when I got up before the alarm went off and my first thought was that "I hope there's a new chapter of Song of Myself posted. I guess I should just stock up on coffee and eyedrops and keep going. Thank you so much for the review.
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: We Belong Together
Lovely! The perfect explanation for the perfect gesture.
And EVERYONE should be up at 1:47 writing fanfic. I do my best stuff when morning is closer than evening, and from the looks of this chapter, you do, too!!
Nice job! -CH
Author's Response: LOL! Great...who am I to argue with that logic, CH? There were a few mornings when I got up before the alarm went off and my first thought was that "I hope there's a new chapter of Song of Myself posted. I guess I should just stock up on coffee and eyedrops and keep going. Thank you so much for the review.
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Crash-Crush
Author's Response: Yay! The list was really fun to do. I know we're all thrilled to see FNB blooming in S4, but I'm just as excited to see how so-in-love!Jim develops. Thank you so much for the review.
Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Crash-Crush
There's so much I love in this chapter--I adore the grocery list, the banter, and that last line, "Hey, where's my puppy?" So great!
Eager to click "next" and read the next chapter! -CH
Author's Response: Yay! The list was really fun to do. I know we're all thrilled to see FNB blooming in S4, but I'm just as excited to see how so-in-love!Jim develops. Thank you so much for the review.
Summary: Even though the color is standard and neutral, she finds it bold in ways she's never been able to be in the past. Pam finds solace and inspiration for her life in the medium of her art.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1905 Read Count: 1418 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1905 Read Count: 1418 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2007 Updated: September 01, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 7
Date: September 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
7 Date: September 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. You've got a very elegant writing style that comes across in the text, and I was wowed by the device of using quotes from Pam's past to explain who she is today. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the quotes part. I actually had some trouble remembering the exact quotes from memory, so it's good to hear that it worked out.