Penname: deerinthepark Real name:
Member Since: April 13, 2007

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Summary: Past Featured Story

She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10705 Read Count: 46278 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet

Haha, I love this twist.  Roy is gonna be piiiiiiiissed.

Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18424 Read Count: 132627 ePub Downloads: 40
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: March 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Peeping Pam

Interesting idea!  Looking forward to more...

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: March 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I love, love, love this story.  That is all.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: March 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I don’t want to ruin your night.

I love you.  That line is killer.  I can totally buy it, too.  I'm so glad for all of these updates!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: March 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Very cute chapter!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91635 Read Count: 137087 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Little Beesly

I'm really into this.  I think it's sweet, realistic, and different.  Exactly what I look for in JAM fic :)

June 10th by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 235] 95
Summary: Past Featured StoryImagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33398 Read Count: 142430 ePub Downloads: 29
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: April 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Homecoming

I just started this story, saw there were a lot of chapters, and then I got to this one and there was no 'next' and I literally went 'WHAT?!'  Update soon please.

Summary: A long time ago on TWoP, I suggested an Out Of Character Bad!Fic. It occurred to me recently that April Fool’s Day is a good day to have the Office characters act like they would never act and say things they would never say. Here’s a series of Out Of Character Talking Heads, each one unrelated to the others.
Categories: Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1076 Read Count: 2236 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: April 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: April Fool's Day: Who's Fooling Who?

I think Jan's OOC would be the put-together, quiet, sexually repressed housewife who quit her job because it was too stressful to manage a successful family life and a career.  Ryan would be happy with his job and eager to start a family.  Phyllis... well, who knows?  Phyllis is possibly the most mysterious and complex character on the show.  Perhaps she would be bubbly and overly happy, recently divorced and super excited about her hot new single life?

I'm getting carried away.  AWESOME story!



Author's Response:

deerinthepark, I should have consulted you first!  I think you're especially on target with Ryan -- he'd be happy with his job and really good at it too, especially sales! :)

I 'm so glad you liked this; it was one of those amazingly-quick-to-write ones, so I liked it too. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, ditp! :)

Summary: Jim goes to a strip club to let off a little steam and sees a well known friend.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1522 Read Count: 1982 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 7
Date: June 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute concept.  A few things: striper - someone who stripes roads.  Weather - meteorology (you know, sun, rain, etc.).  Your - the possessive of you.

Author's Response: hmmm, thanks, yeah i wasn\'t sure about some of those so i\'ll try to fix them!

Summary:

What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas.

Sort of.

AU set in season 3


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6779 Read Count: 12902 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: June 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Some days, they last longer than others.

Hah, nice concept.  Can't wait to see this continued!

Summary: A somewhat bitter Pam reconciles with an unsuspecting Jim. Read: spilt liquids and borrowed clothes. Rated M as the later chapters get racier.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1523 Read Count: 1336 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: June 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 1) My work is unparalleled

I don't really understand the trend of naming stories after completely unrelated songs.  I almost didn't read this out of hatred for the Decemberists (and yes, I've ever seen them live, said hatred is completely deserved).  But regardless, it was a cute story.

Author's Response: The story title\'s relevance will become more evident later on

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim, Pam, and a series of bedroom conversations.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11819 Read Count: 36661 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: July 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: forgiving

This chapter is so beautiful.  Absolutely wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim comes back, Pam's late, and it's time to talk. Takes place in the summer between S3 and S4.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5174 Read Count: 14738 ePub Downloads: 12
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2008 Updated: August 06, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: July 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um, wow.  I don't have any constructive feedback to add, but I loved this.  I think the first person is very difficult, but it sounded enough like Pam for me :) Can't wait for more updates!

Author's Response: Thanks, deer. I\'m glad you\'re buying my Pam. :)

Summary: Jim wants to stop Pam's engagement to Roy, but is forced to watch it all play out because of an obligation to Roy. How far will he let it go though?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39464 Read Count: 39896 ePub Downloads: 24
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2011
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 9
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: I won't let go

I like it :)  Keep it coming!


Author's Response: Hey deerinthepark! Glad you\'re on board!

Gifts by Vampiric Blood Rated: K [Reviews - 141] 54
Summary:

It's been three years since Jim accepted the promotion to New York.  After two years of silence, Pam sends Jim a gift.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11817 Read Count: 35613 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: October 16, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: All His Questions

This is really well-written and believable.  I'm quite enjoying :)

Author's Response: Thanks, deerinthepark!  You can expect to see at least one chapter in the email … if you're willing to beta.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: If You Could Say It in Words...

As I told you (hope you got my email!), I love this, sorry I didn't have time to beta for you!  I think the picture is perfect; not too cheesy, just cute.  I could definitely see Pam painting this.

Really, bravo!



Author's Response: Thanks, ditp!  Like I said in my email response, callisto had a chance to look it over and give feedback.  I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Wonderful Life

Super sweet, loving it!  I think you've captured Pam unbelievably well here.

Don't think I'm not still waiting on new Cardiac Care, though ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks, ditp.  I'm glad you're enjoying.  I will get back to CC in a week or so, when I finish this.  And, howzabout my repeated requests for an update of Acting on Impulse??

Summary: Past Featured StoryCinderella meets Groundhog Day meets Dr. Gregory House. Pam will never be the same. (Set during S3's Ben Franklin.)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Karen, Other, Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21613 Read Count: 41445 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: September 14, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this!  I don't watch House, but know the character well enough.  So I'm not sure how well you're writing him, but your Pam is spot-on!  I love her response to the battery operated question.  Very cute, and I'm looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: August 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aw omg :( This is heartbreaking, but I'm so so so glad you didn't have Jim all excited and happy at Pam's confession.  I see an eventual turnaround in the future... unless you are a cruel, cruel woman.

Summary: Pam goes to New York and realizes some things.  Jam fluff oneshot, all the way.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2035 Read Count: 4730 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: September 08, 2008
Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so good!  So nicely written without sounding like you're trying too hard. I don't think the largest cheese factory in the world is in Oregon, though.  Tillamook is the largest in Oregon.

Author's Response: well we all know how reliable wikipedia is ;-)  I'm sure that fact is wrong but I felt like that was ok for Pam to get things a little out of sorts, sort of endearing.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! And also, the word Tillamook makes me smile, so thanks for that as well.