Great start. This story really has me hooked. And I love the little cliffhanger ending. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Awww, she left without saying goodbye. GO find her Jim!. I'm really enjoying this story. All the chapters seem to end in cliffhangers. Great job.

Author's Response:

I know, I try to end with a cliffhanger to keep things interesting haha, thanks for reviewing! :)

And just when he thought he could move on, a Beesley kiss sends him straight back to where he should be. Great job with Jim's reaction to the kiss. And I like how Kevin saw. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Yep... but I don't think it will be all that easy yet... :). And Kevin is just so fun to write, because that one line :).
Thanks for the review

Yea...it's back. I loved Charcoal & Watercolors and I'm so happy you decideed to do a sequel. So far this is a great start to what I'm sure will be an equally great story. I love that they were marries in the park, very romantic. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I sincerely hope that you enjoy the rest of the story as well! Wherever it may lead... :)

I just found this and I am really enjoying reading it. I love how the story is being told throght their own thoughts. It is a different style, but I like it. Hope you continue.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I wasn't expecting it to go this far but I'm really enjoying writing it, it's different but it seems to work for me.

This is reallygood so far, but.....please don't let her die. I like this story and can definitely see it going good places.

I'm still hanging in there. Hoping that this is like a soap opera where they come back to life. I am totally willing to believe it. But great conversation with Roy.

Author's Response: Sadly, this fic is based on real life, not a soap opera

Thank you, thank you, thank you for not killing her. Now I will sit back and enjoy the JAM. Oh, and I really like the friendship that Dwight and Jim have going.

Author's Response: I think I would get kicked out of the I heart Jim Halpert club if I had killed off Pam. I just can't do that to our little Jimmy. And I think the possibility of a friendship between Dwight and Jim is something that is out there and I wanted to explore it.

A+, five stars and a wonderful job. I could see them both reacting about their relationship that way. I'm glad Jim finally came around. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad I've managed to impress!

Tasteful smut is always the best. Great job. That could be a oneshot, but lucky for us you seem to have another chapter planned. Can't wait.

Author's Response: Tasteful smut...tasty smut. SMUTCAKE DELIVERED.

I don't think it should end at all. Fantastic job. You wrote them both perfectly. Love fancy Beesley and near-naked Jim. But if I had to vote, maybe the smut could be saved until they see eachother again. What can I say, I'm a little old fashion, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy some good smut.

Author's Response: I do see your point, and will take that under advisement.  We shall see.  Thank you, kgarrett!

Ok, I was laughing out loud and my family thinks I'm crazy. Do I ever love Devil! This is a terrific story. And no, it's not hard to follow at all. Great job and I can't wait until the next chapter is up.

Author's Response: I'm glad that it wasn't hard to follow along to. Also, thank you very much for the positive review. I hate to admit it, but it helps me want to write more. Sad I know, I'm like Michael. Devil is a lot of fun, she's been repressed for a long time with Pam, I think. Thanks for the review!