Penname: Mr Bill Real name: William Murphy
Member Since: April 28, 2007

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Snowed In by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 24] 21
Summary: It's completely appropriate. It's a challenge about snow and I've written a story filled with nothing but fluff. And I do mean...NOTHING.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Snowy Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2508 Read Count: 3568 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2006 Updated: July 19, 2006
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just happened to come across this story and as someone who has just recently posted another story about Jim and Pam getting "snowed in", I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your version...very sweet and very sexy.

Summary: Just a couple of minutes of an imaginary episode.

Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 644 Read Count: 2607 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2007 Updated: March 13, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A cold opening

That was very funny and I could easily see that as an actual "cold open".  Well done!

Summary:

They will have a bedroom with red walls and deep blue sheets, and the last thing they will do every night before falling asleep is to laugh at a private joke only they would understand. 

An odd little peice I wrote post-The Job. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 682 Read Count: 3546 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"...because his favorite sound in the world is the sound of her laughter."  Beautiful...simply beautiful! 

Summary: Jim and Pam go out to dinner. The menu? A big heaping plate of FLUFF.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3904 Read Count: 9861 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed 8
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: It's so full of change

Just the right amount of "awkwardness" balanced by the easy rapport they have always ( well almost always) had with one another.  And a very simple but meaningful date with your choice of "Cujino's"...I like it!

Summary: Past Featured StoryShe can’t help but feel like it’s a good sign; a step in the right direction. Set post-The Job.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2275 Read Count: 5167 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2007 Updated: May 21, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was wonderful!  So Jim and Pam.

Summary:

Post-finale drabble.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97 Read Count: 4084 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed 8
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, they so need to work up their appetites...and I'm sure they can find a late night diner somewhere in the Scranton area for a little late night noshin'! 

Summary:

Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 Read Count: 48902 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Word

So Jim and Pam...you caught the feel of their banter beautifully!  And the ending...just the simple question, "Ready?"...perfect and so true to who we know Jim and Pam to be.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment! I appreciate the compliment! Oh, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it all! Thanks. There will be more soon.

The Question by Maybe Once Rated: K+ [Reviews - 9] 7
Summary:

"So, Pam. Who got that job in New York? And.....ROLLING!"

Stream of consciousness drabble from Pam's famous TH. Spoilers for "The Job."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 507 Read Count: 2757 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: "So, Pam. Who got that job in New York? And.....ROLLING!"

Great concept...and made me relive the scene with a whole new slant!  I like that you gave Pam an internal sense of urgency about what the day might bring that contrasted with the calmness of her demeanor that we actually witnessed as we watched the episode. Pam had to understand that the outcome of what happened in New Your would have a huge, probably life changing impact on her and it had to have been on her mind.  I think we caught her anxiety when she asked  Michael, upon his return, about who got the job.  It was clear she wanted to ask if Jim got it, but hesitated and asked about Karen, instead.  You've captured the internal discussion Pam must have been having with herself form the time Jim and Karen left  the day before.   Nice take on it!

Author's Response: The whole episode, it felt to me like underneath that serene smile, Pam was a bubbling frenzy of emotion.   Jenna played it so well, I really tried to capture that here....thanks for the review, I know you are a huge Pam fan, so I consider you the conmoisseur!

Michael Almighty by Swedge Rated: T [Reviews - 8] 2
Summary: Thanks to ElizabethLynn for proofreading and feedback. Not much in the way of spoilers but the reader is assumed to have seen all the episodes.
Categories: Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2376 Read Count: 1462 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Michael Almighty

Verrry niiiiice!

Summary:

 One afternoon, Pam fesses up in one of her talking heads.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 379 Read Count: 2203 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2007 Updated: July 08, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully understated and laced with the charmingly playful denial I would anticipate from these two as they begin their life together.

Birthday Girl by time4moxie Rated: K+ [Reviews - 34] 9
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's never too late to celebrate the people you love.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 930 Read Count: 6325 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2007 Updated: July 08, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Five Months Today

I'd love to see something along this line as part of an episode next season.  I really like how you stayed true to Jim's inability to put what he really felt about Pam out of his mind, despite everything he did in Season 3 to try and bury those feelings.  He just couldn't help thinking about her birthday, even in those "dark" days...it's just not Jim to do that.  You definitely captured that in this story.

And happy belated birthday! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Yeah, I really believe that despite moments of complete jackassed-ness (I know, not a word!) during s3, he loved Pam more than ever.  I think that's why he was in a perpetual bad mood.  ;-)  

Thank you for taking the time to review! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's about damn time -- not only for Pam & Jim to go on a date, but for me to get in on this whole fanfic writing thing. I hear it's the next big thing.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5334 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2007 Updated: July 10, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job Lisahoo...you definitely know how to cut to the chase...in true Hussy fashion. 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Mr. Bill.  Since we know Pam is the number one Hussy, she wouldn't waste any time, either.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year or two before the cameras arrived, Michael takes the staff to the Poconos for a camaraderie event.  Much unresolved sexual tension and angst ensues (uh, between Jim & Pam, not the entire staff).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Roy, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90021 Read Count: 151153 ePub Downloads: 66
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2007 Updated: October 02, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Very nicely done.  Is there a chance we might get to see Pam's "spunky" side emerge over the weekend in a follow-up chapter?

Author's Response:

Thank you!  And hahah re: Pam's "spunky" side.  In a word: yes.  :O) Thanks for reviewing!  (And hello, BTW - I don't think I've seen you around these parts before...or, ur, read you around these parts.) 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Content to Compromise

Sorry...I missed that this was "Chapter 1", so I guess we might see her "spunky" side emerge...hope so and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

No worries - and yeah, there'll be alcohol and a late night or two and...all sorts of juicy stuff.  I'm absolutely incapable of resisting putting them in copromising positions.  ...So to speak.  :O)

Thanks again!

Second Date by Abigail Rated: K [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

I wanted to write about the end of the first date. 


Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 2149 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2007 Updated: July 13, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: July 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just read all three of your stories and they're so "spot-on" (Does that sound British? I'm not British...but it sort of sounds British).  You say a lot so economically...I like that and I try to do that as well...not always successfully, but I like that writing style.  Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review!  I just added a new story last night and it's more than 55 words!  I finally took the plunge.  I appreciate the kind words and I like your writing too.  BTW, I'm not British either! ;)

90 Days by pamcasso Rated: K [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Here’s the poem Pam writes to Jim for their three-month anniversary. It is handwritten. On stationery she created with paintbrush in hand and Jim in her heart. Before she gives it to him she says “Please don’t laugh, it’s ridiculously corny, but it really is how I feel.” 

By the way, please don’t laugh at me, this is ridiculously corny!


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90 Read Count: 2101 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2007 Updated: August 20, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: August 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply beautiful...and I can fully imagine Pam writing it just that way!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading it, and for your nice review!

Names by EmilyHalpert Rated: K [Reviews - 83] 17
Summary:

55 words on choosing a name.

(all stand alone pieces) 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 886 Read Count: 48506 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2007 Updated: January 31, 2010
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: That's What She Said

That was fun!  Great way to start my day.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed.

One Day by Wendy Blue Rated: T [Reviews - 353] 141
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.

Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28467 Read Count: 153689 ePub Downloads: 25
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: February 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just had the opportunity to read this...from the beginning, and...wow...just wow!  So good!  Such great imagery...you paint pictures with your words.

Summary: Flashback to the first time Jim and Pam realized they liked each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2127 Read Count: 1913 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2007 Updated: October 16, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: October 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nicely done!  Excellent job of weaving the actual dialogue into your background story and so very true to Jim and Pam.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! That\'s exactly what I was hoping for!

Summary: Her breath catches when their eyes meet and she's worrying her bottom lip between her teeth again so he just has to lean in and kiss her. His hand slides over her ribs to splay against her back, pulling her against him even more until there's barely enough room for them to breathe without their skin touching. [Spoilers for the end of The Dundies]
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2743 Read Count: 4271 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2007 Updated: November 20, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: how virtue the cat explains her departure

Sexy, yet warm and romantic. Very well done.  I think a lot of us have speculated as to just what might have happened had Pam not spied the camera crew that night in the parking lot of Chilis.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Summary: It's 3am and someone is at Pam's front door... and he needs a little nursing. Fluff? Oh, why, yes. One-shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1440 Read Count: 4677 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2007 Updated: November 20, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Night Medicine

Very, very nice!  Light and sweet...but so Pam and Jim, at least as I choose to see them!  Keep it up and I look forward to reading more from you.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. :)

Summary: This isn't the sort of thing you plan. AU season two. 
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2924 Read Count: 6803 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: December 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting premise and very well wriiten.  Pam can be a bit "saucy"!  Hope to see more from you!

Summary: Christmas traditions mean even more when you share them with the one you love. A little Jim Halpert /Pam Beesly holiday fluff cuteness fest, heavy on the fluff. :-)

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1877 Read Count: 3658 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Mele Kalikimaka

Very nicely done and perfect timing for the holiday!  God it would be fun to see Jim and Pam share a scene just like this.  And the card...someday, maybe?

Author's Response: I know, I feel so sad that we don't have a christmas episode this season.... but so glad you liked my attempt for the holiday!  Thanks for reviewing, Mr Bill!

Breathe by NeverEnoughJam Rated: T [Reviews - 13] 6
Summary:

Jim has a nightmare. Pam comforts him.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Oneshot
Warnings: Violence/Injury
Challenges: Sleepless In Scranton, Hot Hot Heat
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2531 Read Count: 6111 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2008 Updated: January 15, 2008
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: January 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Breathe

That was very nicely done.  Beautifully modulated and paced giving me a real sense of time and place.  A very fresh take on showing us how Jim and Pam truly "get" one another...how they truly love one another.  And a very respectful tribute to the memory of the victims of a horrendous tragedy.  Again, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mr. Bill. I always love exploring that unspoken connection between Jim and Pam. Also glad you found this to be a respectful tribute.

Summary: First Date!! All the parts they didn't show us during "The Job". Shows both points of view from the interview on. Get ready to grin and sigh a lot;-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: David Wallace, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: First Dates
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9830 Read Count: 101446 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2008
Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed
Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Realization

The entire story is so very well written and I love the way you began the first Chapter "Realization":

 

All thought stopped when the note fell out of the folder and into his lap.

“Don’t forget us when you’re famous – Pam”

It was the sum of what he’d be leaving behind.

Her.
Her smile.
Her friendship.
Her presence.
All the possibilities.

 

Very, very evocative.