Penname: nbyevu Real name:
Member Since: April 29, 2007

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Breakable by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 135] 52
Summary: Past Featured StoryYet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other, Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15287 Read Count: 33471 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2007 Updated: November 20, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: November 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There are no words to describe how I feel about this story. That scene between Jim and Frank was just about the best thing I've read in a long time. You wrote this perfectly. Great job.



Author's Response: Wow...thank you so much nbyevu. I don't know what to say about that.  I'm so glad you were able to enjoy it so much...and as I've said in other responses, Jim and Frank were my favorite dynamic to write about as well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...

WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9339 Read Count: 49843 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Into the Rocks...

OOH! Nice.

Summary: Some shower smut because they can.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 804 Read Count: 14413 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2007 Updated: November 18, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: November 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, first of all, when I saw the title of this thing I actually went "HA!" And it was awesome. It's so weird that you came out with a new story now after I had just looked through all of your stuff and thought, "Wow I really like the way bitterpill writes."

Author's Response: That is so nice.  Thank you!  I figured I would cut to the chase with the title.  Thanks for the review:)

Summary: A take on what might happen if Pam and Jim go to an art festival together...
...then a follow-up on all the ramifications of their attendance.

Set late season two.
Categories: Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16379 Read Count: 18056 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 23, 2007 Updated: January 30, 2008
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Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: We're moving forward

I love this! I hope you continue!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m working on it, just more slowly than I would like...stupid classes and finals...

Summary: What happens when Jim, Pam and Roy discover www.jamfancentral.com?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32621 Read Count: 77782 ePub Downloads: 21
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: November 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Far Too Simple Beauty of the Promises We Made

Soooo good. I never thought I'd feel bad for Roy. But I seriously like this premise.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are liking it!

Summary: She’s just now more curious than ever as to how bad Scranton can be that he would choose unemployment before going back there. An AU look at "Branch Closing"
Categories: Alternate Universe, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1114 Read Count: 2057 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2007 Updated: November 27, 2007
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Date: November 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Psh. Wendy Blue, you're so awesome. OBVIOUSLY keep going...but only if it has a Jammy ending, of course :D

Summary: Pam introduces Jim to a lesser-known holiday ritual-Black Friday shopping.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9415 Read Count: 15335 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: November 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: First Timer

Ha! This is so awesome. I've never done Black Friday shopping because I hate lines and crowds (I'm not very patient), but yea...awesome.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Black Friday Helper

I just love this story. Such a nice combination of emotion and silliness. Parfait!

Magic by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 11
Summary: Pam wonders about the fate of a fictional couple. Takes place in early season 4. Spoilers for Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 658 Read Count: 2530 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2007 Updated: November 30, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: November 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok you opened my eyes to the parallels of Jim/Pam and Ron/Hermione. Excellent insight, lol

Author's Response: My brain works in strange ways sometimes- I'm glad I made it work for you! Thank you very much!

Summary: Karen visits the Scranton branch. Post Branch Wars.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1805 Read Count: 3506 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2007 Updated: December 01, 2007
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Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: And The Door For Me

Je likey! Good stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks, and thank you for the review!

Summary: On Jim’s last week at Dunder-Mifflin Scranton, nothing goes as smoothly as he had hoped. AU from "Casino Night".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam, Toby
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1956 Read Count: 1899 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2007 Updated: December 02, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOH this is really good! Looking forward to more. Is this going AU-ish or not?

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Never mind. I'm stupid and I just found the answer.

Author's Response: :) Yep, it does go a little AU (season 3? what season 3?)\r\nThanks for reviewing either way!

Summary: Pam is Fancy and New and perhaps, in recent episodes, sometimes bordering on too Fancy and New. Her mother picks up on this right away at Thanksgiving dinner. This story includes some angst, and some of Pam not being perfect; maybe controversially so. I don't know, but Pam is still fun to write. And, I have Christmas cards to write and presents to buy so honestly, I will just enjoy reading your incredible stories this holiday season. Thanks to all of you who have read mine. SPOILERS for "Branch Wars" and season four episodes.

Still do not own Jim, Pam, or anything related to The Office or any other televised show. No copyright infringement is intended whatsoever; this is just for the sheer fun of it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Mom
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2529 Read Count: 14028 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2007 Updated: December 02, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Healing

That was really, really cute. Very well written. Great job.



Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

Jim Halpert takes a journey through his own personal inferno with a little help from the characters we know and love (or hate).  Will it lead to paradise and a reunion with Pam, or will he be sidetracked along the way?

A takeoff of the classic Dante Alighieri work The Divine Comedy.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21480 Read Count: 18134 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2007 Updated: March 25, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Airing Dirty Laundry

This is a really interesting story, but I am seriously, seriously confused. Michael said Jim wasn't dead, but now he's in hell? Can you perhaps clarify for me?  

Author's Response:

OK, I probably should have clarified a little better before.  Jim is not dead.  He mentioned that he wasn't certain if it was a strange reality or just a dream...but to help you out a little, it's definitely a dream.   

Summary: What happens after the documentary airs and all the Dunder-Mifflinites are bitten by the acting bug?
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1645 Read Count: 33899 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2007 Updated: December 05, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Pam and Jim

This is such a perfect, short and sweet little fic. My favorite one was Kelly. I could actually see that happening.

Author's Response: Heh, me too, she was born for that life, wasn't she? Thanks for the kind review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a holiday inspired fic based on Season Two's Christmas Party. A look into what inspired Jim to get the teapot, and why Pam swapped Dwight for it. From there, it is an AU look at what happens when Pam realizes that Jim took back the infamous Christmas Card and why she's desperate to find out what Jim wrote.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17207 Read Count: 27018 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2007 Updated: March 22, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

First of all, that was just amazing. Second, I was so excited about the premise of this story from just reading the summary, I figured that it couldn't possible be as awesome as I wanted it to be. And it was. I am very much looking forward to more...it's a nice break from studying.



Author's Response: It is that time of year huh nbyevu?  good luck with all the studying!  Thank you so much for your awesome review, I'm so incredibly happy to see how much people are enjoying this.  I feel like you all are giving me such a nice present by liking it.

Summary: What if Pam knew what it felt like to be in Jim's shoes? Literally.

Set some time in season 2.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Dream/Fantasy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7513 Read Count: 13511 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2007 Updated: July 15, 2008
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Date: December 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm so excited...and I just can't hide it! (couldn't resist).

Summary: This is another alternate ending story from season three, beginning just before Phyllis' Wedding and ending at Business School.

Many thanks to Beeswax for her advice and encouragement.

I still own nothing, not The Office, not Jim and Pam, and nothing affiliated with TV or Scranton. I am, however, getting a new laptop for Christmas, which is why I'm purging this one of this story before the holiday. On that happy note, thanks for reading!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12537 Read Count: 57136 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2007 Updated: December 12, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Watching, Feeling, Knowing, Ignoring

I really really like this. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest as well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Maybe it's always been about me......

Yesssssssss

Author's Response: I hope you will keep reading, nbyevu. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: A man grown

Wow. 3 chapters. You're awesome. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you will continue hanging on through this story! I have a little more time...we\'ll see how much more I can get posted. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Silly oneshot in script format in which Ryan tries to hit on a girl in a bar.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ryan
Genres: Drabble, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 364 Read Count: 1254 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2007 Updated: December 11, 2007
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Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Tell us about the boy from New York City...

That's just silliness.

Author's Response: agreed.

Summary: Last holiday season, Jim found his True Love. This year, it's his turn to pull a few surprises. A follow-up to My True Love Gave to Me - and yes, Parma's back!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35249 Read Count: 40512 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2007 Updated: August 06, 2008
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Date: February 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: May

Why are you so awesome?

Summary: Pam gets the nerve to call Jim after she breaks off the wedding, and gets invited along on an impromptu road trip across the country.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25535 Read Count: 66333 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: February 25, 2008
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chicago

OK.

1) Absofruitly love this story. Got all giddy when I saw it was updated just now.

2) It is TOTALLY time for that scene. Looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

1) Awesome, I'm giddy you're giddy!

2) I hate to disappoint, but I'm not sure that scene's going to fit in just yet.  I'm trying to build up the awkwardness and I'm not sure I'm up to that yet.  But I'll think about it.  Sexy things are sure to be happening soon.

Summary:

Karen knew she was in bad shape when Toby sat down next to her.

 Karen's last day in Scranton.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1950 Read Count: 2261 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2007 Updated: December 22, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, I gotta say, I was hesitating on reading this, because I'm far from a Karen fan. But this was really good. Really got into her head. I enjoyed it very mu!ch so. Good job!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam spends Christmas with the Halperts.  (A first Christmas fic)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14081 Read Count: 40935 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2007 Updated: December 23, 2007
Reviewer: nbyevu Signed
Date: December 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Tis the season...

I am absolutely in love with this story. And I'm even more in love with the fact that it's already done so I'll be getting updates steadily throughout the day!



Author's Response: lol glad you love it!!! Thanks for reviewing.