Penname: jinx Real name: gabrielle
Member Since: May 06, 2007

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Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 371858 ePub Downloads: 87
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

To quote Jim Halpert, "Wooops".  But what a wonderful Wooops.  I think the hallmark of a great relationships is intimacy and you did a stellar job of conveying that feeling in this chapter.

I usually wait until the end of a story to post comments but I was moved to break that practice.  Good work Time4moxie.

 

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Postcards from Austraila...I'm crying.  Talk about romantic...

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love the song choice in this chapter Time4Moxie.  The perfect blend of fun and romance.  Just like Jim and Pam.  Being Canadian and from the same area as the Barenaked Ladies I like their music and this happens to be a favourite of mine that I haven't heard in quite awhile.  Thanks for the reminder and another superb chapter.

So far I'm liking this better than 'squirrel mcpants' which I didn't think was possible.  You seem to have a remarkable connection with the hearts, minds and souls of these characters.  This, added to your engaging writing style and talent makes for the best fanfic. 

 

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice touch adding Jonathan - the affection and teasing between the brothers was very believable.

The come on from Wendy was an interesting addition - perhaps reading the remaining chapters will help me understand it's significance because I'm not sure I get it right now.  A test of Jim's feelings for Pam?  Doesn't seem necessary the way his character has evolved in this story so far.  Oh well...

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ahhh!  Dancing...

Very nice

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

As a reader I find your writing style captivating.  I think the way you expressed the passion, intimacy and eroticism of Pam and Jim's 'first time' was very real.  We'll never see it (and quite frankly I don't know if I want to).  Sometimes the fantasy exceeds the reality.

I was so happy to see there is another chapter after this one.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG - I didn't think this story could get any better.  You weave magic with your words Moxie. 'Here she was with everything she wanted right in front of her", such beautiful words. 

You inject the heat of their passion with tenderness and humour in such a natural way.  Everyone should experience this kind of love, it's amazing.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. 

 

 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: September 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Amazing, amazing, amazing story time4moxie.  I love everything you've written but Distance Learning is by far my favourite.  So playful and loving, just as I see Pam and Jim.  Thanks a bunch!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA writer has questioned their calling, and finds solace in the truth
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 496 Read Count: 4080 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2006 Updated: October 25, 2006
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Letter to the New York Sun, Redux 2006

As I anxiously await the 1st episode of S4 I'm reading missed fanfic to pass the time. Time4moxie, this letter confirming the existence of an need for a
Jim Halper was priceless...he will continue to make glad the hearts of adoring women...absolutely he will.

Baby Talk by LoveFool Rated: K [Reviews - 438] 117
Summary:

More Jim and Pam and their adventures in raising baby Jill!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96586 Read Count: 152202 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: November 19, 2006 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Jim, Pam, Jill, and...A

Bless you Lovefool for sharing your gift of storytelling with us. Every chapter has been such a loving tribute to 'family'. Setting it in the world of Jim and Pam was icing on the cake.

Oracle Mom by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 90] 51
Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - The Jim and Pam saga affects more than just those two. Sometimes it's hard to sit by and be a mother while those two dance around the subject.

New Chapter added - more Jim/Pam holiday fluffiness.  :-)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27202 Read Count: 33558 ePub Downloads: 18
[Report This] Published: December 11, 2006 Updated: November 25, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - What She Knows

I like thinking that Jim went home to his Mom after the rejections from Pam.  I like that she is such a great Mom - nice to think he has someone who loves him during all of his angst.

Wonderful descriptive narrative. 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - What She Causes

Thanks again for another lovely story Moxie.  I enjoyed meeting Jim's family

Summary:

This is along the same lines as my other Away From the Cameras, in the sense that I'm exploring scenes that might have happened off-camera (or simply those that we didn't get to see).

A few things: First, I'm working on the assumption that a lot of what I wrote in the AFtC for season II stands (though I likely won't reference any of it here), up until Casino Night.  (Clearly I was quite off about what happened after the kiss...heh.)

Second, there will be flashbacks filling in the blanks of what happened immediately after CN (how long did Jim work? how did he and Pam ultimately leave things? how did she end things with Roy? how did Jim find out about her cancelling the wedding?); the flashbacks will happen largely in the chapters pre-merger (to keep things interesting for Jim/Pam fans during their physical separation).  


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22172 Read Count: 18044 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2007 Updated: June 28, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Phyllis's Wedding - part I

The emotions are so present in your writing, breathing was difficult at times.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Wow - thank you so much!  Well, I'm fully sucked into writing this thing now, so there should be an update fairly soon.

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Meredith, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109602 Read Count: 329023 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 7
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 83: Not a chapter - just a little recap to bring everyone up to speed

Jim.  Such a giver

Summary: Jim, Pam, a baby, a grandma, show tunes, Dr. Phil, The Beatles. Shameless sentimentality and hardly a whiff of angst. No spoilers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Childhood, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2198 Read Count: 4026 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2007 Updated: February 28, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I first discovered the Beatles I listened to this song over and over and over...and over.  I haven't heard it in years. 

Simple and Beautiful

Just like your story.



Author's Response: It is pretty much the perfect love song. And 'simple and beautiful'...I can't think of better praise. Thanks so much, jinx.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 270225 ePub Downloads: 78
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: May 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

Very, very impressive time4moxie.  I read the first 17 chapters all at once after Bluejeanbaby from the NBC MBs told me about it.  Stayed up ready 'til 2am - a definite sign of good writing and great storytelling.  I thought you captured the essence of the Jim and Pam characters very well.  I like your conversational style and I like the humourous elements that flow throughout the story.  Time for me to read some more of your fanfic.  Thanks for sharing your gift.

Summary: A series of drabbly things that all come back to two little words: "I can't." And it's finally done, so apparently I *can* finish this thing.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2718 Read Count: 21348 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2007 Updated: May 30, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 7
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Brazen women

'Dwight appreciated sturdy underclothes'  Got me to laugh out loud with this line.  I'm enjoying your writing.  Thanks.

Summary: Past Featured StoryMember's Choice - Pam thought she was throwing these letters away. But what happens when your garbage doesn't stay in the garbage? Set mid-season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Other, Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47299 Read Count: 105520 ePub Downloads: 26
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2007 Updated: April 01, 2008
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: I was dreaming, I was dreaming of a dreamgirl

I am so loving these letters Azlin.  Sorry I haven't stopped to comment or review but I've just been too eager to get to the next chapter.  Making myself take a minute now because you need to know how great this story is and not just once. 

I think you've captured Pam's feelings (love, fear, joy, sadness) in the most real and wonderful way.  The 10 year old Jim letter was perfection.

Thank you so much



Author's Response: Aw, thank you. Your review actually just gave me the nudge I needed to start working on the next chapter again. I've kind of let it slide for a bit, but I'm trying to get back into it because I know a lot of people really like this story. I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters and I really appreciate your kind comments!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: June 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: it knocks me off my feet

Amazing Azlin.  So many special moments between Pam and Jim woven together in such a lovely way.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! I've been planning this chapter for so long that I'd sort of forgotten how much fun it is, so it's great to see people's reactions! ;)

Summary: An interview with someone who really know the inner workings of Jim Halpert. (Probably not safe for work.....) Nothing spoilerish unless you don't know who Karen is.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim
Genres: Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Jim Halpert: More Than The Sum of His Parts
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3724 Read Count: 8955 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2007 Updated: October 01, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: October 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: All Hail Caesar!

Then he'd be happy, I would be happy, and I could make sure she's happy. And that would totally be win-win-win.

Amen to that time4moxie.  This was a absolutely brilliant idea, executed to perfection.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: October 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: To The Victor Goes The Spoils

F***ing Magnificent!!!!!

Summary:

No matter how much this couple is perfect for each other, they are bound to have flaws. Jim and Pam head to marriage counseling, and learn to deal with their issues in a semi adult manner.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28635 Read Count: 34000 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2007 Updated: June 05, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: May 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Weekend Retreat Prt 2: Teaching Tools

Very well written.  I'm liking the counselling context that you've chosen to illustrate that even when 2 people are in love they can still have difficulties.  Realistic.

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Bob Vance, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael/Jan, Ryan/Kelly, Todd Packer
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7859 Read Count: 11846 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2007 Updated: May 13, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: May 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Part II: Ten-point Questions

Great concept brokenloon.  A very enjoyable read.  Can't wait for chapter 3.



Author's Response: Thanks!  Work on Ch. 3 will start soon.

Summary:

"Why do you want this job?"

His mind is suddenly blank.

"Um..."

Beach Games aftermath, so spoilers for Beach Games, and speculation for the finale.  Jammy, obviously.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3674 Read Count: 2953 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2007 Updated: May 13, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: May 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Conversations

Very well written JAMsoundtrsck.  I'd like to see you continue with the story.

Stolen by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 169] 60
Summary:

Inspired by the finale and the seasons that preceeded it.  Enough said.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21030 Read Count: 63209 ePub Downloads: 22
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Our dreams assured....

Feels like your story is progressing at a pace that works well for these characters.  Dialogue has just the right amount of humour.  Inner thoughts are a little angsy but I guess they would still be that way at this stage.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the pace.  And yes, I tend to vacillate toward the angsty side at times, but my take on it is that I don't think either of them would be easily able to forget all the crap they've dealt with over the past year(s); I think, given some time to be together, be settled, really be happy - they'd be able to let it go.  But I think it'd take a while.  

Thanks for reviewing!