Penname: jinx Real name: gabrielle
Member Since: May 06, 2007

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Summary: Pam Beesley is 16 years old and it is the summer before her freshman year in high school. She attends a school picnic at Lake Walenpaupak. There she crosses paths with some of her future Dunder-Mifflin co-workers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9999 Read Count: 14660 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2007 Updated: September 26, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Perennial Passion

Thanks for wrapping this up so nicely.

Author's Response: you're very welcome! Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy Premiere Night!!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod.  No chronological order, so sit tight.  It might be a bumpy ride through time.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13152 Read Count: 78708 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2007 Updated: November 11, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Little T and A

You rock at this fanfic writing thing Sweetpea

Author's Response: And you rock at leaving reviews!  Thanks, jinx!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Crash-Crush

Your writing is so much fun.  This chapter in particular captures the playfulness which is so adorably JAM.

Author's Response: I really had fun with this one.  Thank you!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: New Sensation

This made me think of my favourite Etta James song, I want a Sunday kind of love.  What a perfect way to spend time with the one you love.  Thanks Sweetpea



Author's Response: Wow!  jinx, that's pretty amazing because while I was writing this, that song popped into my head.  It's one of my all-time favorites.  I have the Etta James version, but I'm partial to Dinah Washington's version.  My mother played it endlessly when I was a little girl and when I saw "What a Diff'rence a Day Makes!" on CD, I bought it immediately.  So, JINX!  And thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Here Comes My Girl

I loved the line, 'he hears the soundtrack of her laughter'.  Very romantic, very loving, very Jim.  Another wonderful chapter in this love story Sweetpea.



Author's Response: Aw, jinx, thanks so much.  I love that line, too.  It's such a thrill when they pop out of your head like that without struggling - the one or two times that's actually happened.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Shake a Little

Seriously one of the most beautiful Jim/Pam chapters I've ever read.  Love the randomness, yet perfection of the proposal.

Author's Response: Aw, jinx, that's quite a compliment given all the wonderful writers here.  I'm honored and thank you for reading along this whole time.  It really is reviews like this that make me want to keep writing more.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Nothing in the World

Just read the last 3 chapters.  The way you capture the voices of Jim and Pam is amazingly real.  Playful and moving.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, jinx!  I'm glad we've seen them talking more, because I feel like I can take a few more liberties with dialogue, knowing that they're communicating beyond a few words and stammers.  Thank you for the review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29494 Read Count: 130566 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2007 Updated: September 29, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: I'll Be Doin' Fine And Then Some

Yowsa!  At least they're finally on the same page (sorry for that, couldn't resist).  Great chapter, can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Doin’ Time in a Lonesome Prison, Where the Sun Don’t Shine

More More More.  I like this a lot.  Anger is good at this point...leads to making up...

Author's Response: EXACTLY!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Bloodhounds On Your Mind

Please let the anger stop soon.  This is getting painful.

Author's Response: It will end eventually...promise.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)

Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3731 Read Count: 49364 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Cooties

TLC - very nice colette



Author's Response: Thanks so much, jinx!

Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 65700 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Missing

I love that you are combining my all time favourite drama series with my all time favourite comedy series.  Excellent job with both Creed and Stanley.



Author's Response: You have great taste in shows! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: November 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Separation

A well written series larrymcg.  This one in particular brought back all the feelings I had watching the closing scenes of SFU.  Brilliant series - really like the way you've used the idea for our friends in the Office.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate it.

Summary: How Pam tells Jim.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50 Read Count: 5484 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2007 Updated: September 07, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great tie in to a previous episode.  I can imagine Pam telling Jim she's pregnant in this way.



Author's Response: can't you just? and i can definitely see jim being all slow to get it. thanks for reviewing!

Playing Catch-Up by McGigi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 73] 38
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam wishes she had loved Jim all her life, and Jim rises to the challenge. Pure fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Childhood, Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10255 Read Count: 21241 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2007 Updated: September 19, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: The Present

Is it any wonder most women want a 'jim' in their lives.  Beautiful story.  Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank YOU! You\'re so very nice! I do want a Jim. I know he\'s a little too perfect in this story, but hey. It\'s a story.

Summary:

What if Pam had been much stronger - bolder - throughout season three? AU because I'm not following much of the S3 storyline, but that's when this is basically taking place. Some spoilers (S3).


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kevin, Oscar, Oscar/Gil, Other, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12857 Read Count: 72977 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2007 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: jinx Signed 7
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: When I'm Awake, I Make The Same Mistakes

Thanks for giving us a present on your birthday. 
Have a Happy!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so sorry it took me too long to respond to this! Goodness!

One Day by Wendy Blue Rated: T [Reviews - 353] 141
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.

Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28467 Read Count: 153445 ePub Downloads: 25
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2009
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: 1:00 AM

The Princess Bride is an awesome flick.  Nice choice.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim are engaged and planning their upcoming wedding, but Jim has a peculiar temporary living arrangement. This story is one week of at-work emails surrounding the situation. Please note that Fancy New Beesly is in full bloom; she takes a hard line with Michael these days.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Jim/Pam, Michael, Mose
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8237 Read Count: 18580 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: September 26, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Tuesday

Love how you've added Mose to the mix.  Hilariously creepy Kev.

Author's Response:

How could one even talk about the beet farm without talking about Mose?  From what we've seen on the show (which isn't much), Mose would be way easier to work with or live with than Dwight!  I'm glad you're liking it.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, jinx! 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Friday

Thank you Kev.  Super entertaining way to pass the hours until Fun Run.  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  You rock for reviewing!

I'm so glad you liked it! It was (mostly) fun to write, and it's certainly fun to put words on the characters' computer screens!  Only a few hours now - running down the clock! ;) 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Wednesday

Too late Kev, you've got a real talent for writing dialogue with humour.  You know these characters well.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, jinx.  I'm trying to get the characters right.  I'm glad to know you think I'm succeeding.  (I'm not always too sure about it, myself!)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Summary: My little "prediction" for the Season 4 Premiere. Spoilers up to The Job. Chapter Three is now up!!

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1255 Read Count: 6091 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2007 Updated: September 20, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: September 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a tease...

Bring it Lloyderine. 

Nice ensemble writing and painting the office sounds like it could be very funny.  Perhaps a whorish green.

 

 



Author's Response: He he he.  But you forget, Orange is whorish. :D  Next chapter coming sometime today!!

Summary:

Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.

 


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43087 Read Count: 271284 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2007 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Early

Thanks for writing some fun for Toby - goodness knows he needs it



Author's Response: Doesn\'t he? Poor Toby....

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: September 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Four Stars

Four Stars gets Ten stars from me.  How I would absolutely love to see a cold open like this on The Office.  You should send this to someone - not sure who but it seems perfect for the show.  I could see the faces of each character as I was reading.



Author's Response: I wasn't 100% sure about this chapter... but you've made me feel better about it. Thanks!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: The Other

Anotehr gem of a cold open.  It would be great to see eomething like this air on the Office.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Business Cards

Whatever it is you do to keep coming up with these clever and funny cold opens - keep doing it.  I love how you seem to channel the characters so well.

Author's Response: Thanks!