Penname: jinx Real name: gabrielle
Member Since: May 06, 2007

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Appeasing Miss Beesly: The Further Adventures of Squirrel McPants by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 103] 50
Summary: Squirrel returns! Jim's got the girl, but what's the price? Set at season 4 progresses, with episode overlaps. The IRC chatters are back, too. :-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14883 Read Count: 22485 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The face of all the world is changed, I think

This was so worth the wait time4moxie...kind of like JAM.

Author's Response: aww - that's the nicest thing you could say!  Thanks, jinx!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed

Gotta love the fluff.  Talk about leaving us in suspense.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks, jinx - it should be up soon....

Time of the Season by A Little Stitious Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 2
Summary:

Her first day at Dunder Mifflin wasn't the first time they'd met.  Mostly AU with perhaps a bit of S2 or S3-related stuff...I haven't really planned it out yet though.  Oh, and the title of the story is also the title of an old Zombies song.

Also, I'm new to this stuff so if I've mislabeled anything, please let me know!  I don't even know what most of the labels mean. :-S


Categories: Past, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3648 Read Count: 8265 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2007 Updated: October 21, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: First Kiss

I enjoyed the story of young Jim's first crush a lot.  Very sweet and touching with the right amoung of angst added to the mix.  Young love, how do we ever survive it?



Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so far! 

Try, Try Again by beruco Rated: MA [Reviews - 72] 33
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam and Jim give baby-making a try.

The last two parts posted 10/22.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10233 Read Count: 47508 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Part Seven: The First In A Neverending Line Of Firsts

So thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this story.  Thanks for not shying away from the difficulties.  They can be a real part of the process too.  Makes the reward that much more precious.

Laughter by WanderingWatchtower Rated: K [Reviews - 32] 23
Summary: What happens before and after "It's a date." Takes place at the end of "The Job".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2469 Read Count: 13156 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2007 Updated: November 05, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The hug was perfect.  Like starting all over again from the time of the merger.  Very impressive for you first fanfic.

Honesty Is the Best Policy by bebitched Rated: K+ [Reviews - 7] 8
Summary: Past Featured Story... And Other Stupid Sayings Pam Learns Might Not Be So Stupid After All. Pam's journey of self-discovery to her beach confession.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3345 Read Count: 2240 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2007 Updated: October 19, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent job capturing the evolution of FNB.

Author's Response: Thank you!

I see you at the foot of some mountains by downtown Rated: M [Reviews - 24] 17
Summary: Past Featured Story

What Jim will remember about their night at Schrute Farms. 

Spoilers for "Money." 


Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 788 Read Count: 6102 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2007 Updated: October 19, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW.  Loved it.  Jim and Pam are so lucky.  So nice to read about and see true love.

Author's Response: they really are. after all this time, it's a relief to see them finally be happy. I'm glad I could help flesh out that story a little bit. thanks for the review! 

Not a Dream by overreaction Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 6
Summary: Jim can't help but realize that Pam's in trouble.


Yes, I changed the title. (last line of chapter 4) Just a note: Reviews are greatly appreciated. Thanks guys!
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2044 Read Count: 17819 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

way to leave us hanging...please post the next chapter soon.

Whenever You Want, Now by falldownmore Rated: MA [Reviews - 11] 13
Summary:

He’s shifting noisily in his bed, and you hear him grunt quietly in frustration before he mutters, “I swear, these mattresses are made of straw.”

SPOILERS up to, and including, Money.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1089 Read Count: 8231 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2007 Updated: October 20, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Whenever You Want, Now

Oh, so that's why the beds got pushed together :)

I enjoyed it. 

TWSS

Starting Right Now by Sweetpea Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 10
Summary: From the stairs to reception.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 621 Read Count: 4144 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2007 Updated: October 20, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've got the same goosebumps I had when I watched Jim work through this on screen.  You really captured what his thoughts could have been in those moments startlingly well.

Author's Response: Goosebumps!  Dawesome!  Completely terrifying doing the first person, so I'm glad it rang true for you, jinx.  Thank you so much for the review!

Apology by expiredyogurt Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 6
Summary: Jim's ride back to Scranton from New York
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 614 Read Count: 2294 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 23, 2007 Updated: October 23, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply stunning.  Thank you.

EMPLOYEE WITHHOLDING by kgreene Rated: K [Reviews - 32] 29
Summary: Michael accuses Dwight of borrowing one of his favorite DVD's two years ago... and not returning it. Unable to prove himself innocent, Dwight gets his hands on the rough footage from that day and makes everyone watch to find the real culprit. But when a terrible secret Jim has kept from Pam comes to light, can the two new lovers survive?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8689 Read Count: 14154 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: January 24, 2008
Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Open and Act One

I really enjoy your cold opens so to see something new from you was exciting.  This story is awesome so far.  I'm slightly biased as Drug Testing is my favourite Office episode.  I like how you've incorporated all of the characters and like your CO's you do a fantastic job of speaking in each characters voice.

A nit pick...Dwight say Dammit, not Damn.  How trivial of me when I enjoyed this so much but there is is.

 Looking forward to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response: THAT... is a great point. You are correct. Dwight DOES say \"Dammit!\" (Which always makes me laugh). You know what? I\'m gonna change it. See? You great fans only make my little dumb stories BETTER. Thanks!\r\nOh, I\'m not sure what my favorite episode is, now that you mentioned it. The last 5 minutes of \"The Alliance\" is PERFECT Office. \"Health Care\" always makes me laugh out loud...\"The Injury\", \"Casino Night\"... wow. I don\'t know which one is my favorite. Wow. Now I\'m puzzling over this... thanks alot. : (

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: October 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: ACT TWO

Absolutely fabulous!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you!

The Luckiest by heartcarved Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 6
Summary: In this moment, in their home, eating dinner with Jim, something they've done countless times in the past and will do countless times in the future, Pam is overcome with the desire to articulate just how deeply he's rooted in her heart.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1801 Read Count: 3798 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 24, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Luckiest

Breathtakingly Beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jinx!

stars fall every time a lover has to face the truth by heartcarved Rated: T [Reviews - 43] 25
Summary: Three conversations take place under starry skies. Four lives are forever changed.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8934 Read Count: 11623 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i've done what i could for you (and i do know what's good for me)

An interesting and plausible take on where Pam's head and heart were at as she called off her wedding to Roy.  I'm curious to see where you go from here.  Down the same path as the show or will Pam contact Jim in the near future?

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: i'm crying 'cause i'm in love with you (you're crying 'cause you have no clue)

Great writing style heartcarved.  I like how your use of words paints such vivid pictures.  I can see as well as feel what you are writing.

A particular favourite passage from the 3rd chapter:

and Pam can feel the drawbridge leading to the fortress of his heart pull upwards slightly, threatening to leave her stranded on the other side of the moat.

Looking forward to reading more from you.

The door is open but the ride, it ain't free by brokenloon Rated: M [Reviews - 17] 7
Summary:

Three things I believe:  They love each other.  Dunder Mifflin would wear Jim down without Pam there.  Parenting ain't easy.  This story follows from those three premises.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2727 Read Count: 3594 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2007 Updated: October 27, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah reality.  It has it's moments.  Usually a bit of bitter in order to appreciate the sweet.   Well told.

 



Author's Response: Thanks.  Yeah, I don't know too many people living fairy tales.

Little Girls' Dreams by Azlin Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 6
Summary: If there was a pre-documentary documentary, the camera crew would have asked the women of The Office to respond to this question: What do you want to be when you grow up? These would've been their (55-word) answers.
Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Angela, Carol, Jan, Karen, Katy, Kelly, Meredith, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Childhood, Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 502 Read Count: 20976 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2007 Updated: November 07, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Pam

I've enjoyed reading your glimpses into the possible dreams of the female characters on the Office.  Any chance you'll be writing a similar series for the male characters Azlin?

Author's Response:

The guys? Hum...maybe. I don't know. I should though, huh? I should write a sequel. Well, now I probably will. But no promises on a time line. ;)

I'm really glad you liked this story though! It was a lot of fun to write! 

Save the Last Dance for Me by supergirlsudz Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 8
Summary: Pam's hands grew clammy and her mouth suddenly felt dry. She had to come up with something. There was no way that Jim was ever going to find out what she was really up to. There was just no way.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4990 Read Count: 4610 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2007 Updated: November 02, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: November 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute.  Funny and sweet.



Author's Response: Aw, thanks, jinx!

Happy Halloween by PokerChips Rated: M [Reviews - 3] 1
Summary: Jim and Pam make up after their little fight in the episode Halloween. Spoilers for Halloween.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2893 Read Count: 4787 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2007 Updated: November 02, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: November 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Heavy stuff.  I liked it alot.

Author's Response: Thanks very much.

untitled by overreaction Rated: M [Reviews - 30] 5
Summary: what you get when you mix happy, expectant JAM with drunk, pissed Roy.

Please review. That would be awesome blossom. with a little extra awesome.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7035 Read Count: 17447 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2007 Updated: December 13, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

While angsty, this story is very well written and attention grabbing overreaction. I'm really enjoying it and can't wait for the next installment.

The Sound Track of Your Life by malcolm lake Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 5
Summary: Jim and Pam deal with an old issue, and Pam has a tough assignment from Michael
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5855 Read Count: 10485 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2007 Updated: November 17, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the mix of old and new song titles. Got misty and angsty just reading them. Like the callback to Travelling Salesmen. You wrote Dwight and Jim perfectly.

Author's Response:

It was really fun to come up with the list.  They were all songs I had on my iTunes, which probably means I'm kind of a sap.  Thanks for reviewing!

Karma Sucks by theofficeOCD Rated: K [Reviews - 14] 7
Summary: Little scence after the end of Survior Man between Jim and Pam.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 546 Read Count: 3058 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2007 Updated: November 08, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Impressive OCD.  I haven't seen Survivorman yet but this scene seems to stand alone. 

Author's Response: Hope I didn\'t spoil it for you. Thanks for the R&R.

Hello, Goodbye by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 90] 47
Summary: Past Featured Story Completed

“Are you free for dinner tonight?” (Hello)

"Yes." (Hello)

For a long time it's just missed opportunities and crossed wires.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14247 Read Count: 28902 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: jinx Signed 7
Date: November 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night

I like that you've presented the events of Casino Night in a new and interesting way.  Good song choice for this scene.

so don't stand idle, waiting by oobadnama Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 4
Summary:

A missing scene (of sorts) from Survior Man.

Spoilers (obviously) abound!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 305 Read Count: 3187 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: will you have carved your mark?

I found that quote inspiring too oobadnama.  I like how you chose to act on it.  Long live romance - in all its forms.



Author's Response: Absolutely. Thanks for reading, jinx. :)