Penname: jinx Real name: gabrielle
Member Since: May 06, 2007

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Home by agd300 Rated: M [Reviews - 40] 9
Summary:

Post ep The Job.  Spoilers for The Job and probably most of season 3. 

"So where do you see yourself in 10 years?"  Who knew one question could provoke a reaction?  Jim sure didn't.  Starts with the David/Jim conversation and moves on from there. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7574 Read Count: 42306 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2007 Updated: June 01, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Be Careful What You Wish For

very well written with believable dialogue. - thanks

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: So I'm going home

Fluff is required every once in awhile. There's a nice balance with reality in this final chapter. I like the idea of Pam and Jim eloping.

Unsent Letters by FancyNewBeesly Rated: K [Reviews - 4] 2
Summary: Letters Jim and Pam never sent each other, spanning from Christmas 2005 through season 3...and beyond, if I feel like adding more. Spoilers through the end of season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 520 Read Count: 9549 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: May 24, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: May 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Christmas Card

Oh my goodness, I'm verklempt (Mike Myers as Linda Richman on SNL.  Yikes, I'm sounding like Michael).  Seriously though, this reads very true to how I think Jim would have written the card.  Humorous, serious and heartbreakingly touching...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always wondered what Jim would have written in that card, so I decided to take matters into my own hands. I'm so glad you think that I at least came close!

I-80 Westbound by brokenloon Rated: M [Reviews - 51] 29
Summary: New technology captured what was going through Jim's brain on the trip from New York back to Scranton.  Here is the transcription.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1615 Read Count: 3946 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: May 24, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Some Interstates are Best Traveled Westbound

Really enjoyable stream of consciousness piece.  Seems like honest, real thoughts and feelings Jim might be having at this juncture.

I felt the nervous anxiety come through in your writing style as well. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.  It was my best take on what would be going through his mind.

Summer of Jam by larrymcg Rated: T [Reviews - 44] 10
Summary:

Takes place after "The Job". 

Jim has finally asked Pam out on a date. What happens now? This story follows their relationship as it develops throughout the summer, and shows how the rest of Dunder Mifflin reacts to both this and other recent changes in their lives.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8797 Read Count: 23069 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2007 Updated: July 02, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: May 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Back

Nice blend of Jam and humour.  I'm looking forward to reading more

1st Dates, 1st Days - Northern Attacking the Hiatus by SheaHeyKid, Sweet Chariots, lemonade, Post_it_Thief, Jake, Single Tear, Vampiric Blood, LinuxLinus, ABZ, mrjoshua, LookAtThesePurses, CallofDuty Rated: MA [Reviews - 124] 26
Summary:

Begun out of hiatus frustration as an exploration of what we might miss of Jim and Pam's newfound romance, this has grown into something unique and cool, a multi-authored exercise in creativity and obsession.

By the way, we talk about it here if you're interested in saying hi.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46565 Read Count: 157072 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2007 Updated: August 25, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The BBQ by Vampiric Blood

Thanks for creating such a warm and loving family.  You've written this chapter in a way that made me feel like I could see and feel everything.  Very real.

Closer by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 44] 20
Summary:

Hmm....how to put this? At the end of Season 3, Jim asked Pam out on a date. I thought I might go out on a limb and fill in the blanks.... (SERIOUS FLUFF ALERT!)

You already have him, she told herself. He came back from New York because of you. There is nothing to prove tonight. She wished she could believe it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8365 Read Count: 23107 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2007 Updated: May 29, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Thinking of a second chance

Well done Moxie, well done.  Nice an fluffy, just what we need to get through the long hot summer.

BTW, adding Kevin and the list was brilliant 

 

The Last Temptation of Jim Halpert by Night Swept Rated: T [Reviews - 45] 18
Summary:

Jim's life for years revolved around wanting something he could not have. What happens when Jim finally gets everything he ever wanted? Takes place the Monday after "The Job." Jim is with Pam. Karen returns to Scranton.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7157 Read Count: 13675 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2007 Updated: June 06, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Line

Thanks for your fresh take on 'the job' aftermath. I'm curious to see how Jim will evolve.

Heart of the Matter by malcolm lake Rated: T [Reviews - 47] 14
Summary: Past Featured StoryAU After the merger.  Pam learns the dreams Jim had before Dunder Mifflin and why he had to abandon them.  Will it change how she feels about him?
Categories: Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21108 Read Count: 43668 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2007 Updated: July 04, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gripping - can't wait for the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I'm glad you liked this bit and hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm hooked. Really like this story a lot and look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  The encouragement really helps

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thanks Malcolm.  Seeing a new chapter of Heart of the Matter made my day.  Once again, well written and leaves me wanting more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you like how the story is going

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

interesting scene with Angela.  Liked the humour in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  I'm glad you like the Angela bit.  I've always had a little trouble with her voice.  ml

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter.  I like how you're setting up some interesting twists and turns. 

Eagerly anticipting the next chapteer



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  Hope you like the latest developments

Charcoal and Watercolors by I Know This Much Is True Rated: T [Reviews - 229] 62
Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE - An alternate universe where Pam and Roy had a wedding, Pam goes to art school in New York, Dwight owns a restaurant and Jim works for a job in advertising that he likes a lot more and gets a lot more money at.
Basically? Dunder Mifflin never exists. And everyone meets under different circumstances.

The characters are pretty much the same -- personality-wise -- they just have different roles and work different jobs.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67523 Read Count: 167535 ePub Downloads: 22
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 15, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

You do 'fluff' very, very well.

Author's Response: Aw thanks! You're too sweet! :)

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: June 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: This Is The Life I Want: Leap of Faith

Charcoal and Watercolours was awsome from beginning to end.  Thank you.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: This Is The Life I Want: Meet Me At Strawberry Fields

Awww.  Very sweet.  I'm a sucker for happy endings...well, almost endings in this case.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 25: This Is The Life I Want: The Graduation Gift

Yeah! Paris!  Great city for Jim and Pam...AU or TO

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: When it Rains, It Pours: Opening Night

I didn't comment on the last few chapters.  In a bit of a rush but also feeling very conflicted about Jim.  I'd like to see him more 'in control' of his life.  If he loves Pam, he should have rescheduled his meeting with Karen to support Pam.  He promised.  I don't feel like this meeting with Karen was a good enough reason to miss the show.  Glad Pam is pissed.

Can't wait to see what happens next. 

 

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: June 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

I just keep picturing Pam's sketch of Dwight as the pervert.  Another great chapter.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10
Date: June 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

Loved, loved, loved everything from the first kiss (do wonderfully descriptive I could feel it) to 'I think I could too'. 

Do you want to go upstairs? Absolutely I do.  Sweet and sexy hot at the same time.

The really off part of me was waiting for Jim to say 'Victory to the forces of democratic freedom' when he came.  Makes no sense in this story but it's and inside John Krasinski thing.

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Changes in the Weather: Heat Wave

I was so happy when I came home late tonight to find another chapter.  Like all good stories, I just can't wait to turn the page.  You've done a wonderful job capturing the essence of Pam and Jim while creating a plausible AU relationship.

Bring on the heat - explicit is fine with me. 

 

Reviewer: jinx Signed
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless

Nice touch adding Creed to the mix of characters.  The dress sounds a little bit like the one Pam wore to Phyllis's wedding.  Can't wait to find out more about Jim's divorce.  Not sure who I'm expecting his ex to be, Karen is the obvious choice but Jan could be really interesting. 

Can't wait - thanks for the second installment today.

The Wedding by Azlin Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 8
Summary: The Halperts attend a wedding and fluffety-fluff-fluff of the sweetest variety ensues.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: Pigtails, Tickle Fights, and Secret Recipes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1888 Read Count: 3754 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2007 Updated: June 01, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8
Date: June 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Love You This Much

So sweet. Very well written. Thank you

Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for the review!

Five Ways Jim Halpert Proves He's Really, Really Back by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 100] 34
Summary: In the week following their first date, Jim's true colors start reappearing....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10089 Read Count: 37997 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Thursday

YEAH!!  Jim's back!  Really enjoyed the natural playfulness of this chapter and the story in general.  Thanks

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Tuesday

got's to love the fluff - feel good stories are always appreciated. 

Thanks for all the great writing you choose to do.