Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9
Date: November 16, 2006
Title: Chapter 4: First Time
Welcome back my dear and thank you for attending promptly to our collective fanfic needs! This is a lovely chapter and there's enough steam without needing detailed anatomical descriptions. What we really long to see, which you've provided, is the two of them talking it out, releasing the past, and proving that they're ready to move on together. Mission accomplished!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the welcome!! I'm through apologizing for the lack of steaminess in my stories. There are plenty of others who pull it off beautifully. I - clearly - prefer to have them talk each other's ears off rather than have them rip each others clothes off. :)
OK. Total lie. In a perfect world they'd spill their guts while leaving a trail of clothes all the way to the bedroom.
No matter how I got there - I'm glad it worked for you!
Now I've seriously got to get back to NaNo. SERIOUSLY.