1 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2023 05:55 am Title: Shipwrecked
I thoroughly enjoyed reading these insights into the tragic Booze Cruise episode. The lawyer jokes and email exchanges were priceless. The only feedback I would give concerns taking care with the dialogue tags and reducing the summary for big scenes. I understand that it's difficult to avoid repetition with that crucial scene in Booze Cruise, but I still thought that some repetition of the events in real-time would be effective for capturing Jim's heartbreak. I am very impressed with all the additional details about Jim's life and Pam as well. The banter was very much in character. Nice on!
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 09:09 pm Title: A Tale of Two Guys
I love this. Obviously an optimistic view but such a lovely one.
8 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2011 12:40 am Title: Memorial Day
I liked the AU and Jim's improv impressions and that the date went well. And I liked Pam's insighfulness and the happy ending.
I did not like that you skipped the smut!!! You skipped several pages of activity and just jumped to Monday! *sad sigh* :)
7 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2008 07:57 pm Title: Dunder Mifflin Dot Com
This was super cute:)
Date: July 29, 2007 07:09 am Title: Definition Of Home
I have read most of this series on and off over the past year (yeek! has it been nearly that long).
It probably would have helped if I read it in order, but eh, I am not picky about things like that.
Hehe: international penguin smuggler makes me laugh.
Only winning 22 games in 8 hours is bad Halpert. I am way awesome at all types of soiltaire, and have an awesome average... so there
So sweet that Pam decorated his apartment
Chocolate covered Macadaminan nuts... YUM
I didn't know that neither the emu nor the kangaroo can walk backwards. Learn something new evry day.
this was such a sweet story.
Date: February 18, 2007 05:59 pm Title: Definition Of Home
I just read all of the Jam Sessions stories in a row. They were wonderful! Do you ever think about continuing them? I'd love to hear about Pam's art classes and whether Jim gets downsized at Stamford...just a thought. Great stories, seriously.
Date: November 02, 2006 01:11 am Title: Dunder Mifflin Dot Com
We’ve had two kisses and a hell of a passionate phone call.
God, how I want to hear that phone call.
Loved this. Thanks.
6 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 03:33 pm Title: Memorial Day
she leaned back against Jim, and he put his arms
around her waist, and they stood like that for a while.
What a wonderful, comforting moment. Just beautifully captures the "comfortable is sexy" dynamic between these two.
I love Pam reminding Jim that he can move coat racks with his mind.
the last thing he needed tonight, with
all of the imaginary Pam porn floating around in his head already
LOL! Pam porn! I love it.
When she tells him she is naked and he slams down the phone I burst out laughing and scared the hell out of everyone in my cubicle row. Try explaining THAT.
Thanks very much.
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 12:33 am Title: Dunder Mifflin Dot Com
Omg....omg....omg......that was awesome. I think I just died. Omg...omg...omg....wow. Seriously my favorite piece to date. That's it. I just died.
Date: September 30, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Redacted
"Hey." He tried to sound natural. Luckily he was good at imitations. He gave her his best Jim imitation, smile and all, "how was your weekend?"
This? Is awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 02:42 pm Title: Definition Of Home
Great wrap up to the Jim-in-Australia scenario. Do some of his souvenirs mirror your own?
Author's Response: Thanks. Yes..I absolutely live in my Australia jacket (my office is really cold) and most of the other souvenirs are things we bought ourselves or others. Except the boxer shorts. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2006 07:02 pm Title: The Phone Call
That was a wonderful conversation.
9 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 02:31 pm Title: Definition Of Home
Very sweet. Welcome home, indeed.
7 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 08:54 pm Title: Definition Of Home
Awww, I love this entire series. Good to see Jim back home again.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 01:23 pm Title: Definition Of Home
Very nicely done.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 08:39 am Title: Definition Of Home
"So, little girl, "Jim drawled in his best Stanley voice, "Would you like to see what Santa has in his suitcases?"
I cracked up for like five minutes when I read that, because you can picture that impression so vividly. This was adorable.
8 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 05:41 am Title: Definition Of Home
So lovely to have them catching up, and be so sweet to each other with all their little gestures. I love these two. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 10:53 pm Title: Definition Of Home
I love the little details you include - the penguin smuggler! - and the sweet, easy way Jim and Pam interact. Yay for more Jam Sessions!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 06:06 pm Title: Redacted
Ahh poor Jim. I feel so bad for him.
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 10:04 am Title: Toast With Jam
I loved this the first time I read it and love it even more today!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 09:26 am Title: Toast With Jam
So sweet. Loved it
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 07:39 am Title: Toast With Jam
I just love this part of Jam Sessions. Poor Jim sitting all alone talking to his toaster, trying to get a hold of Pam. He's just too much. I just adore his reaction when she shows up. Love that he leaves her a message when he's leaving. I've read this one over and over again, I never get tired of it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 07:39 am Title: Toast With Jam
I just love this part of Jam Sessions. Poor Jim sitting all alone talking to his toaster, trying to get a hold of Pam. He's just too much. I just adore his reaction when she shows up. Love that he leaves her a message when he's leaving. I've read this one over and over again, I never get tired of it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2006 09:17 pm Title: Dunder Mifflin Dot Com
That ended fantastically. And I swear, I can see that happening on the show.
Now...what's gonna happen in NYC?