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Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2023 06:39 am Title: Costumes

This was F A B U L O U S !!!
Such terrific backstory to why Jim hates costumes, the right mix of the two of them playing off each other and gently cajoling Jim into something without pressure.
AND YOU GAVE ME TEN?!?! Larissa as the 10th Doctor was PERFECT!

Author's Response: It being still fairly new into their dating relationship, I figure Pam doesn't have to work all that hard to get Jim to do something. Still it was a lot of fun to set them bouncing off each other so playfully. My wife's favorite Doctor is Ten so that's where that came from. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2023 09:53 pm Title: As You Wish

So sweet 🥹
If only Roy didn’t want them to leave then Jim and Pam would have gotten to know each other earlier.
Jam is so sweet together!

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2023 09:33 pm Title: As You Wish

Bill and Helene dressing like Morticia and Gomez is ironic.
Pam Beesly sure love her costumes!
Hmm… this Buttercup sounds familiar 😊. Jim is already so smitten with Pam and he doesn’t even know her name.
Aww he turn his costume into Wesley! So sweet.
Darn… ergh. Don’t worry Jim it will happen.
It was Pam! I love stories with Jam almost meeting earlier.

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2023 09:00 pm Title: As You Wish

Good first chapter! I feel like Jim’s hometown is Scranton but also familiar to the Dunmore area. Those towns are right next to each other.

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2023 07:34 pm Title: Practical Magic

What a fantastic story!!!
I adore the playfulness, the vulnerability and the willingness to be PARTNERS.

Reviewer: OfficeWriter Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2022 06:08 am Title: Costumes

That was hilarious 😂😂😂 And yet very touching. I always wondered about Jim's brothers and got the impression they bullied him a lot as kids. I really like this one. Love that Jim gave a very believable explanation of his dislike of costumes. You're a wonderful storyteller d84;

Author's Response: Thank you! Halloween is always a fun time for sure. Pam clearly is always a fan of dressing up, but no so much Jim. I wanted to explore that as well as explore how they would transition into actually being a couple now that we're into the glory days of S4 and beyond. So why not pull in some of my own experiences and JAM-ify them up a bit? Glad you liked this one.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2022 10:55 am Title: No Pain, No Gain

Seeing you make a surprise reappearance to our little kingdom inspired me to check out some of your works beginning with this which I am enjoying. To backtrack a bit - the concept - fun - thought it would be scary but I’m enjoying the angle. The mention of checking out all the movies/shows on the subject- spot on and exactly what I would do. Which leads me to the refusal to take the pain meds. Got to hand it to Jim. Personal bit- when during my pregnancy I got a tooth infection and had a root canal and then had the tooth pulled I too tried to not take the pain meds. Lasted about 3 hours before I did -(ps.. kid came out fine, grown up now and pretty awesome). So bravo for Jim and Pam too for making him a dinner that could instigate the gag reflex.
Your writing style and descriptions are so well done.

Looking forward to reading the rest and more of your work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it's always a privilege to hear that my writing is appreciated! Even the old writing 😍 I am trying really hard to motivate myself to finish and publish some of the stuff on my hard drive. Even if only self publishing. I will definitely keep the community in the loop if that happens. Motivation is fucky, god knows. 

Reviewer: Yeza Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2022 04:12 am Title: Spooky Secrets

Cupid Dwight!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2021 07:44 am Title: No Pain, No Gain

This is extremely cute, and also seems like a deeply accurate rendering of what Jim and Pam's lives would have been like if Jim had become a werewolf.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2021 06:12 am Title: As You Wish

Lot of fun. Love me a prior meeting story. Mark is a character isn't he. Everyone had that friend I guess. Really enjoyed the interactions with Betsy. Always enjoy seeing Jim - Larissa relationship and I really like the way even Mark and her have a closeness since he seems to be the sidekick that is always around.

Spice Girls and Ace Venura - good nostalgia and I like the image of Jim as Phantom of the Opera - Looking forward to him meeting up with his Christine Daie in the coming chapter?

Reviewer: lazyloris Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2020 09:33 am Title: As You Wish

I just discovered this fic and it was so lovely!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2020 09:12 am Title: As You Wish

Really glad you finally got around to wrapping this one up. Pam's reaction to Jim's revelation is just all sorts of adorable. It's always fun in a prior meeting story when they realize their past connection and this one was no different. JAM Halloween is a great thing whatever time of year. Wonderful job with this one.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2020 10:49 pm Title: As You Wish

Ha! He completes his gesture years later! That's adorable.

"you just said a few minutes ago you should have ditched Roy and hung out with me, and as far as I’m concerned that’s exactly what you did.” This is an update well worth the wait. Thank you for coming back and putting a button on this adorableness.

Reviewer: nicemorningtoo Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2020 10:47 pm Title: As You Wish

I LOVED THIS. Such a good ending. I'm so glad you finished this! Does this mean SnS is next? (;

Could you imagine though if Pam had stayed? If her and Jim actually met and exchanged numbers and she dumped Roy when she was 17? Of course we wouldn't have the plot of our beloved show, but man, I would have loved that.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2020 10:46 pm Title: As You Wish

Pam's possibly multiple costume boxes is a nice touch. I love that little divide in their relationship.

I can't help but smile at seeing Jim not only meet Pam, but also get one handshake away from Katy. Wonder if her lack of appearance in this fic and Roy's disappearance are connected...

Oh, this teen Pam and Jim banter is lovely. They just get each other's senses of humor in every form. And I love not-smooth Jim not quite being able to pull off this big romantic gesture.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2020 10:40 pm Title: As You Wish

It's probably a direct statement about my age just how much I love all the pop culture references in the 1997 section. Ah, Spice Girls mania - it was a simpler time.

I love the Jim-Mark-Larissa dynamic, and how Mark knows him well enough to know he's going to have to provide a costume. And Jim Halpert was 100% the heartthrob of all of Larissa's friends. That is officially canon.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2020 01:10 pm Title: Costumes

There's a lot to like about this one. It feels like a good slice of life of their relationship at this time - the realization that it's new but also already permanent, the joy at being able to be together and still be friends, the relief at finally being them again and at finally being able to say the things they've wanted to say, the opening up of parts of their lives that used to be closed. It's well done.

The backstory of why Jim doesn't wear costumes is pretty darn adorable - and who doesn't love Protective Older Brother Jim? The prank is terrific and feels very much like something that Pam would plan.

And also, I'm thrilled to see a Jonathan sighting.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I had a lot of fun story. Adding in some personal experiences, letting Jim and Pam be BF/GF away from any cameras, and of course who doesn't love a good costume party. I often come back and re-read this one and yeah I like the prank too.

Cousin Jonathan makes several appearances throughout this series. Always fun to bring him in. Glad you liked it and again thank you for the reviews of older stories. 

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2020 12:53 am Title: The Haunting of Halpert House

This is just wonderfully eerie. It's the sort of story that makes me wonder desperately what comes next - which really is the best kind of one-shot, isn't it?

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'm not sure I could have written this one back in the day (I went a little dark sometimes, but this is pretty darn dark). It just seemed very Halloween-y. 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2020 01:06 pm Title: Practical Magic

Coming back after a reread to make sure I leave you a review, because you deserve it! The whole arc of this story is so fun and I really love how you made them have some days that weren’t as great, because I think that’s a very realistic portrayal of a relationship that’s going without intimacy for a while. You’re so good, Coley! The sexy stuff was HOT and the candy debate was hilarious and in character for everyone, and I loved Pam’s retelling of the Dundies night. And you were definitely right, they’re one of the greats.

Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2020 07:38 pm Title: No Pain, No Gain

Aww, this is so sweet!

Reviewer: Dernhelm Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2020 12:46 pm Title: Practical Magic

Oh my God, that's fantastic! Just fantastic! From first to the last line! Thank you for such a great story! (and sorry for the number of exclamation marks).
I especially love their almost fight and their conversation after. It was so achingly, heartbreakingly sweet... And the whole tease game was pretty fun too!
And I bet the Thanksgiving would be amazing :)
I'm ashamed, but I have watched neither 'Dirty Dancing' nor 'Grease.' I have probably to catch up.
Oh, and all of a sudden I feel an urge to buy a pair of white keds :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I loved this whole story, but that chapter with the almost-fight is by my far my favorite part. Well, that and the big candy discussion at work ;)

and if you really wanted to read about that Thanksgiving... let me just direct you to another one of my stories, “Wherever I’m With You” :)  

 

Reviewer: Identitytheftisntajokejim Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2019 11:53 pm Title: Life's No Fun Without a Good Scare

Omg I loved this. Sooo sweet and cute.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This one was so fun to write!

Reviewer: Maidenjedi Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2018 08:16 pm Title: The Schrutes of the Corn

This is extremely adorable. The tone is show-perfect and you captured each of the characters really well. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: Pan_cake_Cats Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2018 01:46 pm Title: Costumes

Very cute!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2018 10:49 am Title: Haunting Familiarity

Very cute! College Andy is basically just Andy. :)

Author's Response:

Basically :) Thanks for reading and reviewing <3 

 

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