Date: March 04, 2024 04:21 am Title: Language Barrier
Very cute!
1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2020 02:39 am Title: Weather Patterns
There could not possibly be a more JAM way for them to get engaged. I love your writing. :)
Date: March 01, 2011 07:16 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
Don't know if you're still out there but I just wanted to say I blew through all these series again tonight. It's hard to believe how much you pack into each of these little chapters. Your characterizations are dead on, great dialog, wonderfully interlacing plotlines. I just love them all.
Date: July 18, 2010 07:30 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
Christ, that was physically painful.
Date: July 18, 2010 07:24 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
So much perfection in this short chapter. The refuge that is the bathroom. The synchronicity of their moods the way the moon controls the tides. This sums it up perfectly:
The next morning, she leans on the edge of Jim's desk, trying to let him know she needs him, without crossing a line she has etched in her conscience. He smiles up at her, and all the bad feelings are forgotten.
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2010 01:21 pm Title: Color Wheel
Another fantastic story, Paper Jam. So happy to be digging into your old work.
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2010 12:43 pm Title: Language Barrier
Paper Jam, I've been discovering some older stories lately and just had the pleasure of reading this one, which is just wonderful. Thank you.
Date: April 12, 2009 09:21 am Title: Weather Patterns
beautiful!!!! i love this!
Date: August 12, 2008 06:01 am Title: Language Barrier
YEEEEEEEAH! I hate The Merger. It is probably my least favorite ep ever...
THIS MAKES MY MORNING COFFEE EVEN BETTER THAN USUAL.
Author's Response: I'm glad I could improve your day, variella!
10 [Report This]Date: November 29, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Color Wheel
okay you linked this on the forum and I can't believe I've never read it before! I love it. Really nice takes on pivotal JAM moments throughout the series, and so realistic too. Also, I'm a sucker for a happy ending, and you certainly delivered. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, kells. I'm also a sucker for a happy ending. I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Language Barrier
I followed your link on TWoP, and even though I originally read this a long time ago, I wanted to tell you that this is such a great story. All of the moments feel so real and it's just such an enjoyable read. And in my mind that scene in the skating rink really happened on the show, too :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, supergirlsudz!
Date: January 17, 2007 02:57 am Title: Weather Patterns
oh my god why do I love the idea of them having sex in the office park parking lot so much??
I really really do
Author's Response: If you want some backstory, check out the sequel to this: Celestial Bodies: http: //mtt.just-once.net/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=890&warning=4 Thanks for reading!
Date: January 17, 2007 02:35 am Title: Color Wheel
this made me laugh because it makes my boyfriend crazy when i thaw my fingers and toes on him in bed...but poor lonely pam, good thing there's always jim
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: January 16, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Weather Patterns
well-written and believable. i really liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 11:00 am Title: Language Barrier
This is so perfect. You have awesome dialogue all throughout this piece and your characterizations are all spot-on. Wonderful, wonderful job -- I enjoyed this so much. If only things had really ended this way!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you SO much, allibabab!
Date: January 13, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
As he sits down, Pam gives him an approving nod. It's almost as good as a kiss.
Oh, because it so is to him, isn't it?
Author's Response: Yeah, Jim tends to take what he can get, at least in season 1/2. Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
Mmm, this was lovely. I think "Mars" may be my favorite even though it's the most painful, because the emotions just feel so vivid in that one. I love him telling her, "I just really want you to be happy." Aw. But I do love them being all playful and together and happy in the last two as well. That's a real treat. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Semby! Yeah, I have to say, Mars was my favourite to write. I got totally sucked into Jim, despairing in his shut up apartment and willing to move on, as long as she was happy. And you know there had to be a happy ending!
Date: January 10, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
this story is proof that less is more. "Earth" is hot of course, but still, "Venus" where we're technically shown less come across as strangely hotter. I like.
Author's Response: Thanks! Venus came about because I've already written something MA and wanted to do something sexy without exposing too many body parts. I'm glad you like it.
Date: January 10, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
Nice. You really captured the essence of everything that we love about Jim and Pam. I liked this story as you took stuff from the past and turned it into an alternative future... I just wish there were there now, damn. So annoying, real life is. I like this fantasy better...
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, writing these was definitely an escape from reality.
10 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
Loved this. And the last chater is SO HOT.
Author's Response: Thanks, PuffingNoise!
Date: January 10, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
God, I love these series of yours. This one had the pefect mix of elements (ahem, there's another theme for you). It was funny and sad and sexy and sweet and wistful and angsty and joyful in all the right places. Hard to choose, but I especially loved Mars - absolutely heart wrenching; and Venus - not only was it tres erotique (and I do mean tres,) but how Pam is so thrilled when Jim says they should go to Le Louvre so casually. Tiny moment, but perfectly illustrative of how they just get each other.
Oh, and candidate for best line in a fanfic: You're going to pop my girlfriend!
Author's Response: Oh, yay, I'm glad the "erotique" actually reads that way! I just want these crazy kids to have fun. Thanks, colette, for the lovely comments (and suggestion)!
10 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
I love these different yet related series you give us. Please tell me you have many, many more in the works!
Author's Response: Thanks Luna! Colette has suggested "elements", so who knows?
Date: January 10, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Celestial Bodies
I love this whole series and your fill-in-the-blank scenarios. Such a great piece of writing!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: December 27, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Weather Patterns
aww. love. i love all of your stuff. good goodness.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2006 08:36 am Title: Weather Patterns
How did you make this so funny and so painful all at once? Bloody glove? Convincing Dwight he's forgotten due to PSD? Standing weekly appoinment with Toby? Jim in pain *sigh, again*? Pure gold.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Par5!