Date: May 10, 2009 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
sexy...and i NEVER use that word
just plain..sexy
Date: May 09, 2009 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
short and sweet. I love it :D
9 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I'll never think of marshmallows the same again.....*gulp!*
Date: February 04, 2007 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Marshmallow fluff at it's finest. Noodles, you're my hero. :)
Date: February 02, 2007 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
BWAH!! Best last line EVER!
Date: February 01, 2007 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
You might want to be naked when I get back
That just about sums it all up right there! Nice job!
Date: January 31, 2007 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so tired I can fall asleep standing up [and I've never done that before!] but I have to, have to, say that I absolutely loved this. Sweet and sugary and fluff, in-character and real and believable, the exact sort of thing I need at the end of long and unbelievably irritating days. I love plain marshmallows. I don't really see how you can't. =P Jim is a nut. [and here I'll stop talking like they're real. bah.]
And You might want to be naked when I get back has got to be one of the most amazing ways to finish off a story, ever. =P
Thank you for posting this!
Date: January 30, 2007 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
PERFECT. Thank you SO much for that. A much needed distraction!
Date: January 30, 2007 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh! SO cute and happy!
Date: January 30, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yummy, yummy, and did I say "squee?" Loved it!
Date: January 30, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never knew eating a plain marshmallow could be so darn hot! The last line was freaking adorable.
Date: January 30, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
MMMM...I really want some marshmallows and Jim right about now! Yummy!
Date: January 30, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. Naked!Jam and foodstuffs. Definitely blue ribbon material.
Date: January 30, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whew! What a way to end a story. Thanks for this!
Date: January 30, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice! That ending was so cute. And honestly, the beginning totally made me laugh. "You seriously eat those? Like, plain?" and then... "Doesn't everybody?"
So them.
Date: January 30, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
....and you said you weren't any good at fluff. That made me smile like a fool, and I think I broke my left dimple in the process.
Although, it does not change my opinion that the colored marshmallows are, in fact, gross.
Date: January 30, 2007 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! So cute!
Date: January 30, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorable! And so quick, too (TWSS, I know, I know).
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
My love for plain marshmellows just quadrupled. I LOVE FLUFF(er nutters! wait.. off topic...)
Seriously great combination of sweet and sexy!
Date: January 30, 2007 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfect fluff! I love when they are teasing each other. I'm with Pam on this; I am all about plain marshmallows.
Date: January 30, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, this is sweet like marshmellows and naughty like ... smores? Anyway, whaddya mean fluff isn't your forte? What is NOT your forte is what I'd like to know. This is tres great :)
Date: January 30, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh YAY. There is a massive, idiotic grin on my face right now.
This is oh-so-sweet and funny. I love that last line -- I can really believe they would talk to each other like that, making their jokes to each other even when they're talking about sex. I love the image of Jim keeping his lips closed against the marshmallow. He really was just begging for it, wasn't he? I'm sorry, I'm not really being helpful or coherent, but this was just so great that my brain has gone POOF. Like a marshmallow! Thanks for this. :)
Date: January 30, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Thanks for that. You just made my very long day a little bit better.
Date: January 30, 2007 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, great. but i love marshmellows plain... my favorite way!
Date: January 30, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
She's happy. He's happy. I'm happy. Oh, delicious. And I'm not usually even an untoasted marshmallow fan. (Not since I wrote my own little Vignette about Jim, Pam and chocolate pudding has a childhood treat made me smile this much.) Thanks ever so much.