Date: September 17, 2020 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
This is both a beautiful Jim-Pam story and a beautiful metaphor in general.
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love this moment between them. I'm a little teary now.
Author's Response:
oh, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: August 08, 2006 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous descriptions. Lovely.
Author's Response: thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice!
Author's Response: thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This: " Jim knows that if he were to make a soundtrack to the moment it would be all soft guitars and lush vocals, songs about being young and having to grow old, bittersweet songs that make him feel rushed and spinning, songs with choruses as familiar as the feel of her hand in his, songs that make him feel content and in love, songs that remind him of lazy summer days and that comfortable, safe feeling of home."
Was perfect. This entire story was just so, so beautiful and honest.
Author's Response: oh, thank you! i have to say that you're probably THE author that got me into JAM fic in the first place, so that means a lot.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the theme of this - your descriptions are so vivid.
Author's Response: thank you! i was really worried that the theme of it wouldn't quite translate.
7 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
This is incredibly beautiful. I love the whole paragraph where Jim thinks about what the soundtrack to that moment would sound like. I do the same thing sometimes. Good job.
Author's Response: thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Simply beautiful
Author's Response: thank you
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the ideas about light and film and friends changing you without you knowing. It's beautifully original.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I loved this part "...songs that make him feel content and in love, songs that remind him of lazy summer days and that comfortable, safe feeling of home."
Author's Response: thanks! i sort of picture jim as they guy that would just make a mix cd for everything.
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful. :)
Author's Response: thank you!
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Another moment full of unspoken words passes between them."
Wow, is this their whole pre-Casino Night relationship in one phrase, or what? Nice job.
Author's Response: thank you! yeah, those two do seem to have a lot of very awkward silences.
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the explanation for the effects of light one film! Very poetic. Little hint: there are a couple of glitches in the fic (second to last para, double comma, for instance) and word mistakes (girls instead of curls) that you might want to check out.
Author's Response: thanks you. i actually just went back and fixed them after cringing over them...i sort of posted this in a hurry.