Date: February 07, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! This is lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: February 07, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so lovely. I think intertwining pinkies and holding hands is so understatedly romantic - and so them.
Author's Response: Thanks soo much! :oD
Date: February 07, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, the elevator of love, finally living up to its promise. Love the delicacy and tentativeness of their connecting...and how in the end all it took was such a tiny, simple gesture. And when he pulls her to him defenseless - so understated, but so sexy. Just a lovely, complete moment.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much, Colette! I love the "defenseless" thing, too; she's physically defenseless because he has her hands behind her back, but I meant it in an emotional/symbolic way, too. And I kept it sort of ambiguous because either one, or both, really, are defenseless in that moment.
Thanks again for the great review! :o)
Date: February 07, 2007 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
perfect.
I always thought that pinky holding was one of the cutest things ever. Soft touches can be almost more intimate than a kiss.
Thanks so much for this.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I'm glad people thought if it as being really intimate, because that's exactly what I intended.
Date: February 07, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1
This is extraordinarily beautiful.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you sooo much!! :o)
Date: February 07, 2007 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Guh. That elevator is one of my favorite places, and, once they are together, I'm sure it will be just as sweet and romantic for them. Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2007 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was so nice. I love fics where Pam doesn't make some big, dramatic declaration of love, but rather just a small gesture that says everything. The pinkies were perfect! Yay Fluff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad to see everything I planned in my head for this came across to the readers!
Date: February 07, 2007 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Mmm, what a nice, wordless snippet.
Pam had known by the stiffness in Jim's neck that it was the end of his and Karen's story together. Beautiful detail- and we know she's gotten good at reading the back of his neck!
Quick note- you might want to check the wording of your disclaimer. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! and thanks for the heads-up about my disclaimer typo! Yikes!