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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2010 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Romantic and passionate and what should have happened if this relationship hadn't been so excrutiatingly slow.  

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was lovely. I love the style of it - how it's quite dreamlike, so like Pam, we're not quite sure it was real when she wakes up.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2007 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Sexy and adorable!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really beautiful work.  The emotions and images are all right there.  Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

SOOOO sweet! beautifully written, heartbreaking, sweet, funny, everything! great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

This has that perfect Jim/Pam ache about it - full of emotion and erotic without being overly explicit. I love that her art work of him is bold and showing it to him becomes a metaphor for finally expressing what she feels. Also, him saying he had to pee - the humor of that balancing the intensity...also very Jim/Pam. Really, really lovely. 

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
"Jim/Pam ache"- I love it!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Gorgeous - just gorgeous. This may sound odd, but reading this was like looking at a painting - does that make sense?  You really create some beautiful images here, particularly in the middle.  (And no, I am not just talking about Jim with no shirt.:oP)

Really wonderful --



Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Saying that reading it was like looking at a painting is such a huge compliment, because that's what I was trying to accomplish with this!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1

That was really, really good - I wish I was as skilled at leaving more to the imagination like this is.

 

Great job! 



Author's Response: Thank so much!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2007 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1

ahh! I love it. You totally had me going when Pam woke up and he wasn't here, I gasped and was like no!! But you made up for it ;) lovely

It reminded me a little bit of my story "Do i have to fall asleep with roses in my hand?" Lovely job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

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