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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

i don't know why this only has 4 stars.... i really really love it! hope my rating bumps the star count up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2009 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

i really like this, the idea of them being so open and honest with each other before even having sex. it's really sweet, and kind of sexy in its own way.

and the last line is awesome. :o)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Ninjam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06, 2009 05:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This was fantastic. Why are there not like 5 million reviews? lol Brava!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2009 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It's so sweet, and the dialog and actions seem in character to me.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

A very natural and very Jim/Pam-like conversation. I second the suggestion for a story about when they're ready. :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: tizzy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

OK I keep coming back to this story, I've read it at least 4 times in the last oh say? 12 hours? I really hope you continue writing and I doubly hope you continue writing in this canon you have created, you have really captured their voices, so congrats, and as a fan please keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I do have another part planned.

Reviewer: Meg Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1

oh my god. In part of my mind I wish it was true... I'm going to read it again.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG I LOVE THE SEXY TALK!!! Sorry to shout, but holy crap - that was...really enjoyable :) Just the thought of Jim making that last promise? *shudder* Um, sequel, please.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I do have a sequel planned.

Reviewer: cheapcolouredlights Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is so natural and true to life. Its a brave sort of turn to take because I don't think many other authors have ever written a Jam convo like this. Good job! I want to read more of this.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: anon Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a wonderful, genuine, natural-feeling, true-to-life kind of story. The only problem is, it realllllly makes me want a story from you about what happens when she *is* ready. And ... what he does about that... yeah. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you :) She will be ready in the next story.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sweet. I actually blushed at the last line.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 18, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sweet and sexy and it's sooo good that they can talk about stuff like this. Poor Jim...that's a lot of pressure to put on a guy...but I'm sure he's up to the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I think Jim would be very attentive and definitely up to the challenge!

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