1 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2018 07:55 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
So excellent. Love this version of the world.
8 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2009 05:25 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
"Thanks for saving the jelly beans."
Haha, so great. I love how you portrayed Jim's confusion at suddenly getting everything he wants, without preamble or explanation. Also, yay for giving Pam such a strong voice. Good job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 01:40 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
OMG, that last line is so perfect!
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2006 02:35 am Title: Revival of the Fittest
It is literally unbelievable how cute this story is. I mean, wow - wicked cute.
Author's Response: Aw, well thanks. It was fun to write.
8 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 12:16 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
Pam is fierce in this! Very nice!
Author's Response: I hadn't thought of her quite that way, but I guess she kinda is. A woman on a mission. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 01:32 am Title: Revival of the Fittest
I love this one. In fact, I'm going to make it a feature, dammit!
Author's Response: Wow, gotta say, I feel honored. Thank you so much.
9 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 01:23 am Title: Revival of the Fittest
"I couldn't help but notice your untimely death." Hee! I loved this... you're not allowed to use the "I'm not much of a writer" excuse, because both of the fics you've posted here are fabulous! Hope to see more from you soon.
Author's Response: Well thank you! I guess I'm still a bit unsure, and a little weary of sharing what I'm writing, but this certainly seems to be the forum for it.
7 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2006 01:07 am Title: Revival of the Fittest
Love these two lines: "...she slides her hand into his and locks their fingers together, mentally swallowing the key..." and "...and if he didn't make her feel like the person she's always wanted to be..."
And this one gave me a jolt - "she...kneels down in front of him, gently easing his knees apart to make room..."
Fun alternate ending :)
Author's Response: I'm living vicariously, I guess. Thanks for reviewing :)
7 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 10:58 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
What a hot story! I love the "thanks for saving the jelly beans". I noticed that your author's notes said it takes place about a month after Booze Cruise but the first line says it's July.
Author's Response: Hah, great observation. I guess I wasn't paying enough attention to detail, I'll have to fix that. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 10:53 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
Aw! I swooned when she mentioned his hands, because I love his hands.
Author's Response: Oh, you and me both. I'm quickly learning that a whole lot of people love his hands.
9 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2006 10:23 pm Title: Revival of the Fittest
Oh, I liked this! You're good at writing the banter between Jim and Pam, and Pam's reasons for picking Jim sound earily like they come from a TWoP "why we love John Krasinski list". Cool.
Author's Response: That sounds like a list that I need to see! Thanks for your review.