1 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2020 10:00 am Title: A cold opening
You are seriously funny. And you know these characters and the tone of the show in your bones. Off to read the rest of your oeuvre. #oohFrench
Date: August 01, 2007 03:28 am Title: A cold opening
That was very funny and I could easily see that as an actual "cold open". Well done!
Date: March 15, 2007 07:49 am Title: A cold opening
OMELETS... oh that is classic Dwight and Michael. Oh, rotting omelets. rotting cheese omelts...
Date: March 14, 2007 09:38 pm Title: A cold opening
... Oh, also? The pervy Bunny? Heeee!
9 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 07:40 pm Title: A cold opening
Haha. That was awesome. Only Dwight would hide omelets instead of eggs.
Date: March 14, 2007 02:47 pm Title: A cold opening
Ha! Very funny, Swedge. Stanley's last line was perfect: "23 across. What a seven letter word for time waster, it starts with an M?"
Date: March 14, 2007 11:27 am Title: A cold opening
Omelets! Niice.
Date: March 14, 2007 10:40 am Title: A cold opening
Hahahahaha! That was AWESOME. You defintiely need to write more often. You've got Michael and Dwight down. HEE.
Date: March 14, 2007 10:25 am Title: A cold opening
Toby, you worry too much, and that is why you are going to die alone under a bridge.
I love you, Swedge.
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 09:44 am Title: A cold opening
Omelets? Cheese omelets? LOL! Oh, Swedge, you have caught the insanity that is Michael and Dwight. I applaud you. It is SO difficult for me to write Michael, that I must deeply admire anyone who gets him as well as you do here. Thanks very much. I look forward to reading more of your work.
8 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 08:15 am Title: A cold opening
Swedge? Whoa. It's just...weird that you're here.
I love Michael's response to Toby. And the story was dawesome! You may want to consider going back and putting more line breaks in the dialogue, though, to make easier to read.
Author's Response: Thanks. This isn't my first posting here though. I wasn't sure how to do the line break dialog thing because the line breaks leave too much of a gap in my opinion and make it look too spaced out, but with no breaks I can see that it would be hard to read for some.
Date: March 14, 2007 05:44 am Title: A cold opening
I like it, and I love me some ensemble fics. Keep it up!
Date: March 14, 2007 05:30 am Title: A cold opening
Hahahah, that made my morning. Love the part about Toby dying under a bridge, love that Dwight hid omelets of all things... you win at life.