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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2019 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love Kelly being sympathetic there at the end. So adorable. And the rest of it is of course also amazing.

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2009 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorable! Amazingly written - so much emotion! PERFECT!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great job, Puffing!  The darkness allows them to release the fear, and say and do what they wouldn't before.  I love how his hand naturally finds her hip, and she reaches for his forearms.  So sexy!

And Kelly, in the morning?  OMGOMGOMGOMG....Secret's out, guys!

Again, great job!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG, Puff, we need a supply closet -- stat!!  Or for someone to lock those two in a room until they get this mess straightened out.  Thanks for this!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks!

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute. Also? Never fall asleep with your clothes off in the office. A very sweet read.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: breadandjam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1

The moment they reveal themselves is so simple, there's no long drawn out explanation.  It's almost an unspoken understanding and acceptance.  It's what you want to happen because best friends can read each other's thoughts.  Yay for the supply closet!

Author's Response:

Thanks! And yes, that's exactly how I wanted them to do this- I think they know exactly what the other feels on some level, but are too afraid to acknowledge it.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1

This put a big smile on my face.  It's so sweet.  And I love that you had Kelly find them, and Kelly's response to that.

Thanks for this. 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mox!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1

So simple. THe dark gives strength. Love itin its simplicity. And yep, it will be all over the office in minutes with Kelly knowing it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you went ahead and wrote this...such a simple, sweet moment. This: ...he sighs, and she can feel her hair float around her face - what a lovely thought. And Kelly being the one to find them? Perfect. 

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much, Colette!

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