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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2008 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

God, this was so hot!!! Well written which is not always the case with smut :)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was amazing. =)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Um...I'm very very sorry for not reviewing this earlier because I've definitely read it a couple times...but it's completely amazing and hot so yeah...very good.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sorry I forgot to review when I first read this.  That roof definitely needs to make another appearance on the show.  It's the 'anti-parking lot'.  And yes, this is smokin' hot!!!

Reviewer: camerasparring Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwwww. That was really hawt. And amazing. I loved it. Great job. I love Jim at the end, it made me wanna hug him. :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was hot.  Very nice.

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2006 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooh hot! love this "keeping it secret" concept, and i really liked the way that you gave the story enough context in the beginning...before jumping into all the smutiness :)

Reviewer: neptune1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2006 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Teh hotness! Perfect smuttiness. And I love fics where Jim and Pam have to keep their relationship under wraps.

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2006 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1

hot!! nothing hotter than public shennanigins.

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 01:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I'm so thrilled I could be an inspiration to you, and that more hot fic came out of it (TWSS). Nicely done. Very hot, and it's nice to read smut that I didn't write.

I'm still stuck on the idea that I could inspire something. Wow.

Author's Response: Well, your story was H O T and it stayed with me after I read it. I had to see if I could try something along the same lines. I'll write more smut if you promise to!! :)

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 12:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn. Wow!

Author's Response: Again - I'm so glad people don't find it to be too much. I suppose I'll have to try another smut story one of these days!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Naughty Jim and Pam! Nicely done.

Author's Response: Lol - thanks nqllisi!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yowza. Very hot fic. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Morning Angel!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ummm...hot. Really, totally hot. I think you have a very bright future writing Jam smut.

On a more disturbing note, I loved Dwight here: "...you would be poor and forced to live on the streets of Scranton. And I seriously doubt that you have the martial arts capabilities required for that kind of life."

Author's Response: Hahaha! Thanks - is it wrong that when I was proofreading my own story that line made me laugh? And if you know of any way that I can make a living writing Jam smut, please let me know!! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so deliciously hot. I'm glad Pixel's story inspired you to write one of your own. You both deserve more than the 10 maximum rating we have here!

Author's Response: LOL - Thanks for letting me know you liked it! I was nervous about this one - wasn't sure if maybe it was too much, ya know?

Reviewer: Willow Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't think I have anything to say but... *blush*

This was very good!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!

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