10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2009 12:16 pm Title: Acoustics
incredible.
loved all of it.
8 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Acoustics
This is one of my favorite episodes and I'm glad you gave us a peek in to how it could have been. This line was so perfect as to how he was feeling - "And just then, your heart does this weird triple beat thing, like it's trying to tap dance its way out of your chest because she's just so close."
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Date: April 02, 2007 06:36 am Title: Acoustics
I'm a sucker for fics that focus on a quiet, single moment instead of a 'big' dramatic premise - and this one conveys so much about their relationship. The 2nd person p.o.v. makes this so poignant and the last few lines (especially the very last one) are just so touching and sad and hopeful all at once. Really lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much. Like I said to one of the other reviewers, I was a little torn on the point of view, but it really just came out that way, so I'm really glad people enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 02:22 am Title: Acoustics
Jim. Guitar. Jim playing guitar. Jim singing and playing guitar. How could I NOT love this? Even with the heartbreaking ending, I LOVE.
Author's Response: ;) Thank you. <33333
Date: April 02, 2007 01:35 am Title: Acoustics
you know no one's ever said it that way and probably never will again.
Gah! Broke my heart! And:
"So, you'll teach me?" she asks is another wonderful line, because it obviously has so much more meaning that just playing the guitar and sums up the emotion of the story perfectly. Sweet and sexy, as well!
Author's Response: To be honest, Pam asking that is probably one of my favorite lines. ;D Thank you for reviewing!
Date: April 01, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Acoustics
That was such a sweet, quiet moment between them. I loved that you wrote it from Jim's perspective in the second person. It was a cool shift in the usual narrator voice.
Author's Response: Thank you for mentioning that. I was actually reaaaaaaally back and forth on the perspective because.. I generally don't even READ stuff that's written this way, but uh. It's just the way the story wanted to be written, so I'm glad it came across well. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Acoustics
wow, THANK YOU for this, so much love!! it was moving and beautiful, and such a wonderful, original idea. i read the story and then listened to the song immediately after, the effect was incredible. love!
Author's Response: :333 Thank you so much. It just made sense that.. that would be the song he'd play for her. ;)
Date: April 01, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Acoustics
Oh. My. Gosh. That was AMAZING!!!!! Acoustic guitar = swoon! Great job!
Author's Response: ;) Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Acoustics
oh MAN. guys playing guitars ... definitely one of my favorite things EVER. and pair that with jim, and his HANDS, and then kissing PAM, AND SINGING TRAVIS SONGS and you get, like, the hottest thing ever. EVER.
Author's Response: o/ I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Date: April 01, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Acoustics
Oh, that was just lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: April 01, 2007 11:45 am Title: Acoustics
i love that episode,and i really love this story. so simple, so romantic, its great
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that episode, too. You can just see by the look on Jim's face that having Pam in his room is probably Best. Thing. Evar. for him. XDD
Date: April 01, 2007 11:35 am Title: Acoustics
This was perfect. Thank you.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. :)