Reviews For Through Denim
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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2017 07:15 pm Title: Through Denim

so what happened over that year and a half? leave some clues

Reviewer: Klankie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2007 11:40 am Title: Through Denim

Wow....just wow.  So delicious.

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Through Denim

Oh wow...just...OH WOW!  I give you a standing ovationf for that wonderful piece of work! 

::clicks the ADD STORY TO FAVORITES button::

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2007 09:00 am Title: Through Denim

This is hot like WHOA!  You did a fine job with the explicit sexin'... a FINE job.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:39 pm Title: Through Denim

You know I love this, but see? Everyone else does too! Nothing to be scared of :)

Author's Response: Thank you.  You are the bestest beta ever.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Through Denim

Good job and great job reconstructing it.

Author's Response: Thank you, and I appreciate the comment about reconstructing it - it sucked.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Through Denim

Too.....Hot....Brain....Broken....no....words......

  



Author's Response: Awesome.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 06:16 am Title: Through Denim

Awesome!! This so does not suck....I applaud you :) This was WAY hot. Well done!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Through Denim

That was very nice!  No rotten veggies here!  I think I personally would have gotten Jim out of his denim (as an author, I mean, ahem!) a little sooner (and into Pam, she embarrassedly implied), but... this was nice, too!

Or, as I like to say ... thank you for the lovely smut. 

I like the line: The "please" is what keeps you from opening the door.  Also, "because seriously(?) how did you get to this place?" is perfect.



Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting on specific parts - that really helps me to "get" what works.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Through Denim

Whew.  That was hot.  I think I need a cold shower now.  HA! 

Feel free to write more smut - often ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm considering it.

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Through Denim

holy shit

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA.  Thanks, very eloquent.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Through Denim

uh, plot?  Who needs plot?  This was so amazingly intense.  Just. Wow.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I have no idea why I get so nervous about posting this stuff.

Reviewer: lostfox555 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Through Denim

Holy God...that was SO HOT. I read it twice and still can't come up with anything better to say. That was, just, yeah, write more of that kind if thing...please God.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  Believe me, I've got other ideas for smut....maybe a series...I don't know.

Reviewer: ameliakrasinski Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Through Denim

really good; i enjoyed it. it just was really sweet with some sexiness added. i really enjoyed it and well i don't know why but it brought a smile to my face

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to go full-on physical at first...but I couldn't.  I way too much of a girl - I gotta have the emotion too.

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Through Denim

...*asplodes*

So. I love this in so many inappropriate ways. lkfajs;dklfj basically; there's not much else I can think of to say. <3



Author's Response: Why thanks. 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 04:35 pm Title: Through Denim

Oh my. Let me just say that, no, this doesn't suck at all. So immediate, so palpable, so freaking HOT. The 2nd person narrative just magnifies the intensity and intimacy - and those aren't easy things to convey. And then the last couple of sentences - so tender, and so Jim and...just so well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Colette - that means a lot.  I didn't know I was going to go 2nd person...and the first time I do - it's from Jim's POV, which is also a first.  Huh, weird.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Through Denim

Very Hot.  Nice job. (so to speak!) ;-)


Author's Response: Thanks Moxie

Reviewer: allibabab Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Through Denim

SO SO SO HOT.

Seriously, with the almost-fully-clothed-ness, and the against the door, and the thigh on the seam of her jeans, just-- yeah.  YES.

I'm slightly incoherent.  This is completely, completely fabulous.  WELL DONE.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate the comment.  Yeah, I seem to have a thing about sex-through-clothes  ;)

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Through Denim

okay so this was like the hottest thing ever. 

Author's Response: I believe I've already thanked you for your support, but THANK YOU.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Through Denim

plot schmot, this is the part we all skip to anyway

i adore smut for the sake of smut and dry-humping is awesome

haha...good job  



Author's Response: Ha - funny.  Yes, in a weak moment, I have been known to skip the plot.

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