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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2008 10:52 am Title: Four xxxx

Mmm sweet fluffy goodness. I love well-described kisses. =)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Four xxxx

With this one, I wonder what went before - why weren't they together when he broke up with Karen?  Why was he waiting?  Had he expressed interest again and she said something to make him think she needed time?

Other than that one confusion, of course I liked this!  My favorite part was "he reached around to cradle her whole body up against him"!  So sweet and wonderful.  And I like the mention of how they're actually free to do this.

(For prior chapter review:  Oh, that's what he could have said on Casino Night... "Do you need some time to think about things?")

One more...could it be a wedding kiss?  (Goes to see.) 



Author's Response:

I thought about putting in all that before stuff, but then I decided to just go with what came out, so that's what you got.

And you're either a very good guesser or this ending was very predictable. ;) But don't forget the epilogue! Technically you have two to go.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 11:07 am Title: Four xxxx

all he really wanted now was to make it perfect.

Ooooo! Good stuff. I like this one a lot. :O 



Author's Response: Thanks! Now if only we could see it on TV...

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