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Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2008 10:37 am Title: Friendly Flirtations

pamisgreat and jimisawesome are so them :)

The IM's? Dead on. Internal voices? Dead on.

You've got them down pat I think :) Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 07:33 pm Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

Great story.  It too was fresh and amazing - cute idea to tell the story in a series of IM's.  Very well done!

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

Really cute..and I can tell that Pam's last line would work ANYTIME on me.. lol...

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

Please continue to distract yourself in this manner.  This particular chapter is my absolute favorite so far.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 11:44 am Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

I'll blow you first and then we can cuddle. Okay?

I seriously snorted (like Jim) when she said that. Go Pam, the dirty talker!

I love the idea of them IMing from separate rooms -- because they won't be able to keep their hands off each other otherwise.

Awesome. More please! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 07:58 am Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

Ok, I was wondering how they were IM'ing if they were both at Jim's place!  Jim & Pam going at it like bunnies -- now this is what the people want!!!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 04:21 am Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

LOL! Love thiss story! "I'll blow you first" Lol, nice onee

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 11:44 pm Title: Chinese Food and Other Things

Hee!  "I'll blow you first and then we can cuddle."  Aw, it's so romantic.  ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 04:24 pm Title: This Is Going to Be a Long Day...

This is fun.  I like how you let us figure out what happened from the chatting instead of specifically showing.  Although a little "where" did it happen would help my imagination along.  Not that I'm... imagining... anything.

Author's Response: I haven't even figured that out myself!  It might come out later, though.  It's implied that they fulfilled Pam's fantasy, but they also did it on their lunch break, so maybe they sped over to Jim's?  Did it in Pam's car?  On the floor in the middle of Michael's office?  WHO KNOWS?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 12:32 pm Title: This Is Going to Be a Long Day...

I like that you decided to keep this in IM format.  It's more provocative in a way to imagine the supply closet nooky rather than have it all spelled out.  And pillow talk done via IM?  Seems very in character for them.  

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought a detailed sex scene would sort of detract from the essence of the rest of the fic, I guess.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 11:41 am Title: This Is Going to Be a Long Day...

Ooooooh, Pam!  You little minx!  Hee.  I love it.


Author's Response: I think Pam needs to let out her inner-minx...

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 10:59 am Title: This Is Going to Be a Long Day...

More more! Like this!

Author's Response: I'll try to get more soon!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 10:58 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

LOL! I love this story!!

Author's Response: Good :D

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 08:02 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

Funny stuff.
It's good.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Benny_Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Ahem, Moving On...

Ah, this story is so entertaining! I love it. I can't wait for more. It's wonderful how much they can say when they're not really face to face, and then when Pam's actually with Jim... well, it's very true to love, in that respect. Great work. Update as soon as you can!



Author's Response: I just updated!  I'm glad you find it entertaining!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Ahem, Moving On...

So awesome! Yay, Fancy New Beesly! I love their playful banter!!!

Author's Response: Fics with banter are my favorite.  I wish there were more!  I like it a lot better than the angst and the drama and the overly fluffy/cutesy.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 02:08 pm Title: Ahem, Moving On...

Eeee! This is cute and funny and sexy and silly and OMG I can't believe they're being so honest about what they're thinking but I'm so glad they are! Why can't Pam on the show honestly just tell Jim, "I want to fuck you in the supply closet"??? It would clearly solve all her problems.

Author's Response: Clearly! ;)

Reviewer: annagirl93 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 11:34 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

ahhh, dying of cuteness!!! need more!!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is posted!

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 11:31 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

pamisgreat: Oh whoops the enter and delete keys are so close to each other.

pamisgreat: Well good thing I was already as embarrassed as I could possibly be...

jimh2: so i don't get the thrilling conclusion?

pamisgreat: Suffice to say we fucked.

BAHAHA. That made me laugh real hard. Because its so out of Pam. But would be so hilarious for her to do that. I like this story. The banter makes me laugh real hard.

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 11:21 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

pamisgreat: Oh whoops the enter and delete keys are so close to each other.

pamisgreat: Well good thing I was already as embarrassed as I could possibly be...

jimh2: so i don't get the thrilling conclusion?

pamisgreat: Suffice to say we fucked.

BAHAHA. That made me laugh real hard. Because its so out of Pam. But would be so hilarious for her to do that. I like this story. The banter makes me laugh real hard.



Author's Response: I'm glad!  It's very out of Pam, but I know I certainly have those days where I'm kind of out of it and more honest or silly than I usually am.  She at least has drugs to blame...

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 04:41 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

Andydrew

I am so stealing this name.

I feel your... hard man junk...

I am laughing so hard at this line I can't stop. 



Author's Response: I imagine Pam laughing pretty hard at it too, then realizing it was too ridiculous to actually send.

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 02:02 am Title: Ahem, Moving On...

*giggles* I don't know what it is, but I really like this. :)

Author's Response: I'm pleased :D

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Ahem, Moving On...

BAH HA HA HA HA HA:

wait is this a SEXUAL fantasy, beesly? i'm appalled! here i was thinking there'd be unicorns! this is highly unprofessional.

Unicorns!  I love Jim.  I also love the chapter ending.  That was fabulous.  Such a fun story!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:32 pm Title: Ahem, Moving On...

Oh wow...this is so fun to read; chatting can be quite revealing sometimes.  The fact that they are so close together does bother me though...I don't think that they could keep this up without attacking each other; I don't care if it's in the closet or not.  Apparently the roof is easily accessible, so there's that in a jam.  I did not just type that.

Author's Response: I thought about that a lot.  I decided to deal with it by making Pam a little out of it and by having Jim convince himself she can't really be serious.  I fleshed the latter out a little more in the most recent chapter.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 10:26 pm Title: Friendly Flirtations

Cute and fun. Love IM fics. Looking forward to the rest!

Author's Response: Me too!  I want more of them on here!

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