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Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 09:17 pm Title: and hell is just a sauna

Okay, first of all, how in the heck did I never read this story? I think I was in Europe and incommunicado when you published chapter one, so that goes a little ways in explaining it, but it’s still inexcusable.  Because its so. freaking. awesome.

 

I’m going to be really annoying and quote a selection of my favorite parts, but before I do that let me just say that I LOVE that they watched 10 Things I Hate About You over the phone together. LOVE it. And also, no one on the planet writes a better Michael Scott than you. No one. Greg Daniels be damned.

 “Well, thank you Stanley.  The wet blanket.”  Michael groans, full of sarcasm.  He pinches the bridge of his nose and squints.  “You know, I would’ve expected something like that from Toby, but not from you.” I can *see* him saying this. “Pam, you need to stop this.”  Angela interrupts, her voice filled with stern discipline. Jim is no longer leaning.  Pam freezes with embarrassment. This freaked. Me. Out. I froze along with Pam, like “Ah! Angela knows!” Pamburgler. LOVE “No, it’s just... Jan got really mad last time we did it.” “That’s what she said.” Best use of twss I think I’ve ever read “Johnny Depp, Pirates.  Persuade me.” You get his cadence perfect! How do you do that? “Toby, your vote doesn’t count, so why don’t you just get back to your desk.” Love. His neck screams apathy. This line? Awesome. "It just brings back bad memories. That’s all." OUCH!!!!! "Excuse me, but this is still a workplace." She stays sternly, not bothering to whisper. Awww! You kept the Pam/Angela pseudo-friendship alive! “That is what I call acting!” Perfection.

Author's Response:

I think you were in Europe when I started and I'm still not done! good grief.

 I'm so glad you liked it!! And are you kidding me?! This was not annoying!! I loved it!! So specific and I'm so glad that you loved it!! I love writing it and glad others enjoy it too :D

I love so much about the things you chose to be.  You rock.  Thanks for the awesome amazing review and I may send ch4 along sometime when I'm happy with it (because I'm not right now) *cough* 

Anyhoo, thank you!!! I love your reviews and you :)  s'laters

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 12:01 am Title: and hell is just a sauna

I just have to say that you are now my absolute hero. You have combined my Favourite Movie ever (I kid you not. I have seen it so many times and i know the lines and the music off by heart) and my Favourite tv show.

I can't wait for the next chapter, please finish this story. I love it. 



Author's Response:

aw PokerChips thanks!! I love this movie too (my sister and I could recite the movie.... without it playing so this story was begging to write itself)

I'm so glad you like it and I promise you next chapter will be soon!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 09:29 pm Title: and hell is just a sauna

Dunder Mifflin Presents... very cute! But poor Pam.  She would have been better off doing the drunken dance on the table.  

Author's Response:

haha Dunder Mifflin Presents, Love it! haha, taht's what I was thinking of when I was writing this too.

And maybe she'd have been better off doing the drunk dance but you never know, things may turn up in the future :) Thanks for all the reviews kaystar!  Glad you liked it :)

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