Reviews For City Love
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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2023 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hate that I love this. But something's missing! It feels wrong that Jim should be happy without Pam, yet it was perfectly possible (if Pam didn't exist). Other than that, an amusing fic! I do like Jim and Karen. What a missed opportunity!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2008 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm a proper Jim and Pam fan at heart, but this was very cute. You wrote the Karen from Stamford, which is the Karen I liked =)

Reviewer: Team Karen Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

THANK YOU!  I love Karen and Jim/Karen and I appreciate it whenever anyone here has the guts to do a Jaren story.  Plus, its a good one, too, so great job!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwww, it makes me both excited and sad to read happy Jim/Karen. I really think they could (can?) work this way. Love how cozy and domestic this felt.

Reviewer: FancyNewBeesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww...I GUESS Karen is okay in a fantasy world where Pam actually married Roy. *wink* The toothbrushes plotting together thing was very cute.

Author's Response: Thanks! The toothbrush plotting was my favorite part, too.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

You know, a story needs to be pretty damn convincingly written, to get me to go with the Karen/Jim thing. And for the length of this story...you had me. I like that the Karen you chanelled was the one we met in Stamford...when she still had spunk and personality. And it was nice to really sense Jim feeling the love - regardless of who was doling it out. Well done!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, Colette!! I'm glad everything came across how I wanted it to!

Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I actually really like Karen, especially Stamford Karen.  I think what you wrote here is very plausable had the merger never happened, so it kindof makes me more sad for her in the sense that she was headed somewhere very good before the merger.  Great story!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's so sweet! Karen is so lovely and assertive and fun in this that you've almost convinced me that she should have moved in with Jim!

This is really nice. And the last line is a real kicker -- it feels at once open and honest, and a reminder of the different choices that Jim could have made.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I'm glad you like the last line. I was worried it ended too abuptly. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm a Jammer too but I must admit, this was a sweet story :) You wrote their relationship great and the dialogue was very believable.  Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

I read it...me the epitome of jammers, I read it.  Only for the John Mayer...City Love is an awesome song.

It was cute, and I liked it...well, only cause in my mind I convinced myself that he wasnt really really really happy...just kinda happy

I promise this meant to come out as a good review...

congrats on trying something new! :) 



Author's Response: Thanks!

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