Date: May 28, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Her lips are sweet from the cocktails and he thinks he could go his whole life only tasting the one taste.
Love this line, but the whole story made me squee. Just like Pam to have a little too much to drink to calm the 'ole nerves, and they just want to get to the "more than that" part of the date. Love it. Thanks.
9 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I can't pinpoint what makes it sit so well, but it really feels authentic and is addictive - I'm bummed to have finished it!
Please post more soon... Maybe a glimpse into the date conversation? Or what happened after she left the conference room talking head?
Date: May 27, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story. I'm happy when their happy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
ok, everyone is coming up with these awesome last lines... and i'm LOVING IT!!!
Date: May 19, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha...Pam isn't the only one who's missed those things. I like that Pam got a little drunk...nerves will do that to ya. =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE it. Seriously, this is great!
Date: May 18, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Really loved this. Perfect scenario. Last line was perfect and so true!
Date: May 18, 2007 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww... I love that they're being cute yet awkward with one another. This feels just right in tone. I am going to love this summer of first date stories!
Date: May 18, 2007 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
He manages to croak out from behind his fear, doubt, love and lust and everything else.
That about sums it up, doesn't it? All that stands between them, and isn't really a barrier at all. Nice job!