Reviews For After the Fall
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Reviewer: Once Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2020 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 9

I really like your vision of Andrea. You moved her into a relationship with Jim organically and ended it with class.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2019 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 6

The angst is perfectly awful here, but I want to highlight something else, the beauty of this line: "that suddenly, it occurred to him as he was holding her that he felt for the first time in months that he was home, where he belonged." Lovely.

Reviewer: Rissa Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2009 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS STORY! it's so in detail. you did a great job

Reviewer: G_Luv08 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2009 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow. This story, especially the last chapter, is just amazing and written with so much beautiful detail. Keep up the superb work :)

Reviewer: Gabby923 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2009 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

I am impressed....great story.

Reviewer: Sonni Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2008 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 15

Beautiful, beautiful story. Especially the last chapter... So much love... It had me go "aww" at least 100 times.

Author's Response:

I'm a bit late in responding to your review, but I wanted to thank you for taking the time to comment.  :o) I must admit...this is one of my earlier fics, and I tended to be waaaaaaay melodramatic in the beginning, so sometimes I cringe when I look at older stuff.  That said: It's nice to hear that you really did enjoy it.  :o)

Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: gobiascoffee Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Amazing! This story is just amazing. I love that you made Andi such a three dimensional character. So perfect. I love how they figured everything out together and the last chapter was just amazing and perfect and wonderful. Such a good payback for all the previous angst!

(Oh, and totally not a big deal, but in the last chapter you said they were dancing to Train's "Love Will Come Through". The song is actually by Travis!)

Author's Response:

So here I am responding to your review nearly six months after the fact, but a discussion over on the Fanfic discussion thread reminded me that yes, I need to go back and respond to some older reviews!  :o)  I'm really glad to hear you enjoyed this story; it was one of my first fully fleshed out ones.  I had such a great time writing Andi, because I really wanted to write a believable - and likeable - love interest for Jim, someone that we could not feel too horrible about him being with.  And I had entirely too much fun with the whole Pam-doesn't-know thing.  And thanks for the Train/Travis thing -- I totally knew that, must've been in a hurry.  :O)

Thanks for reviewing (and BTW: Your screen name is awesome!) --

Reviewer: lesslikeyou Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

Aaaaand, now you've got me crying.  I watched the fanvid before reading this, was that my mistake? ;)

 This is such a great chapter.  Definitely not too high on the angst-o-meter.  I could hear their voices through your writing - great job.

If only I "Andi" had ended up being so nice in real life. ;) 



Author's Response:

I have to tell you - it really is such a thrill to read new reviews of an old work; this one was my first fully complete fanfic, so it's kind of a sentimental one for me.  :o)  ANd YES that video freaking kills me. 

Heh, yes, Andi was long before we even knew who Karen was (though I did know that he'd have a love interest and that Rashida would be playing her). 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lesslikeyou Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2007 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Ow.  That really, really hurts.



Author's Response:

Ohhhh -- I'm sorry!  Yeah, this one's quite angsty for the first half (and as I was posting, boy did some people give me the business, LOL).  But I can promise you that there's a fairly long happy ending.

TWSS!  *bursting out laughing a la Michael Scott*

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2007 12:29 am Title: Chapter 15

Not just smut, but girl7 smut which is some of the prettiest smut of all the smut. ;)

Where to start?  So much to take in. Oh yeah, that was looooooong. (TWSS)

Just wonderful as usual.  Such sweetness, pitch perfect bantering (how I love the bantering) the joking and the tickling (guh!) the tears (sometimes mine!). Snow Patrol, for fuck's sake!  You're killing me with Snow Patrol, but in a good way.

There was a lot of kissing, and that makes us very happy. (That would be me and Smiley!Jim icon)

Wait! Halpert-Beesley-palooza?

Better. Than. Pancakes.

::bounce-bounce::



Author's Response:

Hee - glad you liked the smut!  Hands down, I had the most fun writing the "rules" chapters -- so much fun.  I'm really glad you liked all the kissing -- and of course, I totally aim to please Smiley!JIm icon.  (I swear to god, I get a big old grin just thinking about it, hee.)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2007 07:16 am Title: Chapter 8

OH, my god. In the middle of all the angsty-great angst, the Even Finer Work Award.... too much! I love it.

Author's Response:

Hee - yeah, that's the only thing in this chapter that wasn't just over-the-top angsty.  :o)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: emmyred Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow.  This is without a doubt the best fanfic I have ever, ever read.  Completely amazing story.  I bow to your awesomeness!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love, love, LOVE your internal monologue stuff.  I must be a glutton for angst, cause I totally eat it up.  Your writing is so visual and the characters' "voices" so perfect that I can see them literally in my head having these conflicts.  Glad I found another winner!! 

Reviewer: JamGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2007 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

fyi, they dont sell alcohol in PA grocery stores. Just the state store or a lovely "beer barn". Loved the story though!

Reviewer: Becca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 15

This was the most amazing story I have ever read, EVER!  You're incredible.  You captured their characters perfectly, which is the hardest thing to do in a fanfiction.  And, that love.  All that love.  You made it so real, it was heart-breaking, and beautiful.  You had me laughing, and swooning, and crying.  Thank you so much for that.  Again, you're incredible.  You're awesome.

Reviewer: Becca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 06:28 am Title: Chapter 15

This was the most amazing story I have ever read, EVER!  You're incredible.  You captured their characters perfectly, which is the hardest thing to do in a fanfiction.  And, that love.  All that love.  You made it so real, it was heart-breaking, and beautiful.  You had me laughing, and swooning, and crying.  Thank you so much for that.  Again, you're incredible.  You're awesome.

Reviewer: kellybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2006 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

Yipee. Plaudits!

Reviewer: Glenn CoCo Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2006 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

perfectly sad! really well done.

Reviewer: JIMLOVER Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2006 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

AMAZING!

Reviewer: Katie Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow.  Thanks!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh, I loved it!
It's VERY realistic; I could definitely see this truly happening. I loved how they took it slowly, and how it was hard for them to believe it was all true. Aah.

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2

I am just tearing through everything you've written - and loving all of it!! Please continue. I need a happy ending; they need a happy ending!  (though the angst is delicious)

Author's Response: OH, thank you so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  (ANd I love the feedback!)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 15

Excellent chapter

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 11:16 am Title: Chapter 14

very hot

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 10:45 am Title: Chapter 12

lvoed it

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