Reviews For A Nice Break
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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, how sweet!  Your Mark is a really good friend.

I like how Mark heard about Beach Day from Karen, and how he convinces Jim that he didn't misunderstand Pam. And isn't this great advice! This is your chance to actually be happy again. So take it, man.

Take that chance indeed, Jim. 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes he will get the girl but  we have to wait so long.

Author's Response: Yes, sadly that's the truth! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

so interesting with the outsiders perspective!!!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! I had fun fleshing out Mark's character. I was hoping his POV would be unique and so far, unwritten. ;)

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