Date: June 21, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Wish I Could Tell You
Very cool story...it was sad in the middle, but the wonderful ending made up for it! I agree with whoever said it could be a series. I would love to read more! Anyway, great job and awesome writing!
Author's Response: Thanks everyone! Alot of reviewers ask me to continue on with oneshots - so I've been working on writing series instead. They'll be up soon, and they'll be up to date with the times. Hope you enjoy those as well! :)
Date: June 21, 2007 06:06 pm Title: Wish I Could Tell You
Minor - Kelly only has one e in it.
I think it is good characterization that Jim wouldn't prank/annoy Dwight right then.
I think this was good S2 characterization all around, and it was a really good ending. And apparently, my vocabualry is gone, because I can't think of anything else to say.
Date: June 21, 2007 09:47 am Title: Wish I Could Tell You
I liked this. This is a terrific oneshot, but I definately could see this as a little series. She could leave the picture on his disk and then he would know to. But I just always want more JAM. Anyway, great job.