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Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 09:47 am Title: Chapter 7 "Michael and Jan"

I LOVED this.   It's a great chapter in the series, but would also be great on it's own.

I have always hoped that Michael and Jan would figure things out and just live happily.  This story really showed a different side of both of them.

well done,

luchy 

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 08:52 am Title: Chapter 7 "Michael and Jan"

So sweet and innocent.  A new side of Michael and Jan that I loved.  Great description of Michael's mother.

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Michael and Jan"

I really enjoyed seeing the sweeter side of Jan.  She was introduced to us as a tight-ass, and now after Women's Appreciation and The Job, we view her as a psychotic nympho.  But I am really liking this sweet, genuine, heartening Jan.  Very nice.  :)

Reviewer: flamingninja Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2007 10:39 am Title: Chapter 6 - "Kevin and Packer"

This one was amazing, you are really nailing the character personalities.  packer deserves everything he got, and while I feel bad for Kevin, it made it very funny.  Who's left besides Phyllis/Bob Vance, Stanley, and Oscar?  Not sure I would want to read about any of them, but it might be funny.   Good Job! 

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - "Dwight and Angela"

And a fun time was had by all.

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 6 - "Kevin and Packer"

serves Packer right for being such a pervert!!! 

I'm so glad you decided to continue!!!  I want more!!! :) 

Reviewer: overpaid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 5 - "Creed"

Classic Creed!  Great job!

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 4 - "Ryan and Kelly"

This story was so sweet and it was nice to see another side of Kelly.  I think this is my favorite in the series so far.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3 - "Meredith and Andy"

One of my favorite stories from you.  Can't have a good Andy story without some singing.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:19 am Title: Chapter 2 - "Toby"

Poor Toby =)  I liked how the girl looked similar to Pam.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1 - "Dwight and Angela"

I absolutely loved this story.  You did such a good job with the "behind the scenes" of a hidden romance.   I loved the dinner setting and the "never nude" shorts.

Reviewer: overpaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 11:15 am Title: Chapter 6 - "Kevin and Packer"

Great twist in this chapter.  I loved it.  That seems very much like something Kevin would do.  I'd like to hope Packer will learn from this experience, but I'm sure he won't.

Reviewer: Yesshh Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - "Dwight and Angela"

Glad to see you're back! Keep 'em coming.

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