Reviews For About damn time
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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2009 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

AAAHH! that was perfect!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2009 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

*snort* Pam's momma didn't raise no dumb girl. Very cute.

Reviewer: effayoffay Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2008 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heehee!! That was just adorable. =)

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha! That was so funny! 'Help me find my pants' Loved that bit. : ) Great job, it seems like it'd be impossible to take this anywhere in 55 words, but you managed to do it spectacularly.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tuna!  Apparently Jim losing clothing will be a trend in S4.  Why should Dwight & Meredith have all the fun?

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 02:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw Lisa some how I didn't see this when it was first posted, and now I've stumbled upon it. It's brilliant you did an excellent job. For me the 55 word challenge seems utterly impossible but you did a great job of dipping that toe.

Author's Response: I could never do a multi-chapter with a planned out story arc, like you do.  Thanks for reading, DM!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Ha! Loved it Lisahoo!

Author's Response: Thanks, aggiegurl.  Who doesn't love Pantless!Jim?

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Great job Lisahoo...you definitely know how to cut to the chase...in true Hussy fashion. 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Mr. Bill.  Since we know Pam is the number one Hussy, she wouldn't waste any time, either.

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the way you set this up and then delivered. 'Help me find my pants' indeed! What a way to jump into the deep end of the pool, lisahoo! Glad to see you in here with the rest of us. Welcome!

Author's Response: Thanks , NEJ. I still have my water wings on, but if it will get Jim out of his pants, I'll paddle in a little further....

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1

hehe i like this. it's much better than any first fic i could write, so keep going. of course you'd go straight in for the kill and have jim pantsless in your first fic... hehe

Author's Response: Thank ROJ.  I'm afraid I'm not very patient when it comes to Pantless!Jim.  I'll bet Pam isn't either.

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAHAHA!! That's right, lisahoo, it is about damn time... you joined the ranks of fanfic writers! woohoo!! and what a wonderful premiere! there's more to come, right? *smiles hopefully*


Author's Response: Thanks, StarShine!  I don't know if there will be more writing from me.  Who knows, if I have a story to tell, I'll tell it.  But for now, this little snippet was fun.  (Jim with no pants, who doesn't love that?)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lisahoo, how could you have been hiding this from us all along??

I'm so proud, I want to hug you so bad right now.

squee! I love when readers join the dark side



Author's Response: What can I say?, I think about Jim making breakfast A LOT.  Try it.  It will make you smile when you are stuck in traffic on a 100 degree day.  And if he can't be making my breakfast (what with him being a fictional character and all), he should definitely be making Pam's breakfast.  Hmm, I think that might be a euphemism for something...

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lisahoo!!! Check you out! Your 55 word is the prettiest of all the 55 words!! <Roy> (is it ok to quote Roy?) lol. Good stuff here!

Author's Response: Thanks, LF.  It's ok to quote Roy, just as long as it's Hoy!Roy.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

HA!  What an zingy beginning to your fanfic career!  Goooo, lisahoo!!


Author's Response: Thanks. LLBarrette was the first fic I reviewed, so every time I look at reviews I've written, you are right there at the top. *warm fuzzy*

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

(1) that is amazing (2) i wish i was the one finding Jim's pants (3) i'm RainCity over at TWoP and for some reason I thought you had been writing forever. i guess you learn something new everyday!

Congrats on a very short, but very well done job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, RainCity.  I clearly spend way too much time thinking about Jim's pants.  And breakfast. 

(I've only been reviewing forever, because fanfic helped me not lose my mind last summer, and pretty much all of S3).

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay!  I couldn't believe it when I saw Moxie's post. Prima nocta, baby, another fanfic writing virgin deflowered!  This 55 word challenge helped me pen my first, I'm so glad you joined in too, lisahoo

And what a great ending to their first date!  Woohoo!



Author's Response: Thanks, EH!  Neither Pam nor I are very good at that patience thing.  At least not where Jim is concerned.

Reviewer: jillyree Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Moxie didn't lie!  This was GREAT!  (You better make sure she gets me my free gift!!) 

Author's Response:

Hey, Jilly, she left that gift with me actually.  But I think I want to keep it for myself.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y254/lisahoo/office/JK-gift.jpg 

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

GREAT little twist!  I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Who doesn't like Pam & Jim naked?  Oh, right, Karen.  Oops.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Woo hoo for Lisahoo!  That was the best ending ever.  What an awesome start. 

Author's Response: Thanks, FOL.  Some endings are beautiful beginnings.  Ending of S3 = Beginning of S4.  (I hope!)

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hehe! Very cute.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Who doesn't love Jim without pants?

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lisahoo!!! (Said a la Andy: "Tunaaaa!")  You sneak -- you've been holding out on us all this time; apparently your skills are NOT limited to amazing photoshopping.  Seriously -- love this! 

Dialogue is definitely very them, and I adore the little twist (heh).  Unexpected and sweet and sexy.  

What a perfect foray into fanfic - and I cannot tell you how delighted I am that you've come over to the dark side (even if it's just this once...which I'm thinking it might not be....).

Way to go!



Author's Response: I haven't been holding out, really.  I was just out in the nasty heat today and had to entertain myself somehow and this thought put a big smile on my face.  Sadly, it didn't do anything about the heat, though.  Not my fault, though.  Jim without pants will do that.  Thanks for the review, girl7.  (Sorry there's nothing about spanking, though).

Reviewer: Annabel Winslow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Appreciative applause, lisahoo!  You are an awesome and generous reviewer (and Photoshop queen)... it's great to see you showing off your writing chops as well.  This was as cute and fluffy as a baby bunny.

Author's Response: What can I say?  Jim with no pants -- who doesn't love that?  Thanks for the review, AW!

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha. I like this....very cute...and, if they were ever in that situation, then yes...I can see them reacting that way. Nicely done...

Author's Response: And can you blame Pam?  I mean, once she has Jim in her apartment, she should really just take his pants and keep him there.  For a really long time. Really. Long.  

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

YOU. ARE. AWESOME.  Love it!!  Be warned - it's addictive. 

Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm just doing my part to get Jim naked.  (For the good of womankind and all that.)  You know, since I can't quite seem to do it with Photoshop.  And I can't screen cap my imagination.  Dammit.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think 55 words is a harder challenge than writing without restrictions, but you did an amazing job with that and your first fic... Yay! Go Lisahoo!!!
So funny, and the voices are so them. And I totally laughed inapprorpiately at the let me find my pants...

Author's Response: Wait, 'let me find my pants' is inappropriate?  Uh oh.  There's a lot of inappropriateness going on in my imagination then.  I'd better spoiler bar it...

Reviewer: Susan M Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yaaaaaaaay!!!!   About damn time, indeed!  Great job, lisahoo!  

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm not so good with the patience.  55 words is about all I can manage before someone is naked.

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