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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2020 03:19 pm Title: Hypothesis

Again, the exchange about how long it's been is just... too much.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2020 03:18 pm Title: Proximity

"He wonders how many times this has happened: near misses in the dark, behind a curtain of Good mornings and How was your weekends." How you put this line in a fic about phone sex, I'll never know.

Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 08:47 pm Title: Daybreak

Oh wow! I love the tone of this. It really feels like they're good friends who've just discovered their relationship can actually gave this whole other side they've only dreamed about, but still everything goes so easily and isn't weird. It's so sweet and fun to see them discover each other this way. Not to mention how hot it is when they trade fantasies!

Reviewer: EternalFangirl Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 22, 2019 11:13 pm Title: New Territory

Omg I want to marry this fix. It was seriously that good!!

Reviewer: TheCelticOne Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2018 09:46 pm Title: Daybreak

I absolutely loved that. Every bit.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2009 09:00 am Title: Daybreak

wowzie wow and wow. that was so great!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2009 11:52 am Title: Daybreak

You need to write more like THIS.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Daybreak

That was sexy and hilarious at the same time (just like Jim and Pam I suppose) and I really had fun reading it, although I do think that you need to write an alternate version featuring that barn dance someday. Perhaps at the Schrute Beet Farm where they serve smutcake and icing? :-) Thanks for this!

Author's Response: Thank you, pigeon!  In an interesting coincidence, a story with the working title of Barn Dance is actually in the blueprint stage right now.  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 10:23 pm Title: Daybreak

Okay, Jim needs to go away again... MORE!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 10:18 pm Title: Exchange

This is SO good!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 10:11 pm Title: Directions

AWESOME.

“To get where they need to go, do these boxers just need to go down, or will a little up and over action be necessary?”

Best line ever!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Hypothesis

Okay wow, me is in loveeeeeeee. Best fic I have ever read. I love Jim realising he's drunk but doesn't care lol

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 10:01 pm Title: Proximity

Bad real life, but that chapter was awesomecakes, you wrote them perfectly ;)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Borders

SMUT :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 09:53 pm Title: New Territory

People have been telling me to read this for ages and I'm SO glad I did, it's amazing. I love the new *old now* Pam and eeeeeeeep pantless Jim ;)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2007 08:16 am Title: Daybreak

Sorry, I took the summer off, but I knew I had to come back to read the rest of this amazing fanfic. Thanks so much! It was truly a great read.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 11:04 am Title: Daybreak

Sorry I haven't reviewed until now.  Can't tell you how many times I've reread this.  So much love for your writing, the hotness and the silliness combined.  I think it'll take Jim a while to get used to little Miss Courage and Honesty.  But I think her new forthright ways will help bring him back to the fun loving guy we all knew.  Well, that's what I hope anyway.

So I assume the barn dance with be at Dwight's place? Ha.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 10:25 pm Title: Daybreak

Although it's a bit sad they couldn't have their first date that night...you managed to still make it very very hot!  And your chapter end notes made me laugh.  Will there be a barn dance story next??

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:50 pm Title: Exchange

Um... wow...this is getting hot.  I love that they both had fantasies about each other way way way back.  Just makes it all that better now.

Author's Response: Thank you for being such a generous reviewer, flamingosinparadise.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Directions

Wow...this is getting hot.  I love Pam's asking Jim about the detour...nice humor thrown in there.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Hypothesis

Haha...I doubt anyone is too sad about the lack of a barn dance.  (I certainly am happy with where this is going)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Proximity

Love that you had Jim wondering about that VS shopping trip.  What guy wouldn't?

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Borders

I love the randomness in their talks.  Very nice to see them open with each other.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:09 pm Title: New Territory

So glad to see a new story from you!  Really liking where this is going!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Daybreak

I've been all up in another fandom lately, and as such have been neglecting my Jim/Pam fic. This was awesome. You have such a great grasp of their banter, their give and take. It's sexy and hot and sweet and very THEM. (And something I hope we'll see some of in canon -- a little more heat in their comments to each other.) I'd go into more detail, but I'm just so filled up with flail for this story (is that even possible?) that I'm chomping at the bit to rec it everywhere. 

Plus your A/Ns at the bottom of each chapter were pure gold. Made me giggle, seriously.

Adding to favorites for sure. Great job! 



Author's Response: Thank you, lapdogdesign... I'm glad you've returned to us!  "Filled up with flail" is such a great turn of phrase!  

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