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Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2023 05:39 pm Title: Part II.

KAPAM!!!!!! Love it!!!! More people should love it too!

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2023 01:58 pm Title: Part II.

KAPAM!!!!!! Love it!!!! More people should love it too!

Reviewer: AmeliaHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2023 12:59 pm Title: Part I.

GREAT start!

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Part II.

I think I could like KaPam if you write it. (:

amazingggggg. =)

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Part II.

Allow me to explain: "She had nothing but a white sheet wrapped around her"

Pam wandering around her appartment wrapped up in white sheets seems straight out of the movies (see A. Jolie in the beginning of Mr. & Mrs. Smith).  And every time I see it, I think it seems a bit goofy.  Why not grab a robe, a towel, a t-shirt?  Instead you're going to completely disassemble your nicely made bed?  As for the L-shaped sheet, (exhibit Dirty Dancing) you'll notice that frequently when a man and woman are in bed together, she will have her chest covered, he will have his waist covered.  Alas, the movie epidemic of L-shaped sheets.  I didn't mean to be confusing, I just wanted to tease you a little because I think the sheet was a little movie cliche-ish.  Not unlike sex-kitteny feathered high-heel slippers.  I did like your story.  Sorry I was confusing. 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Part II.

A loosely draped white sheet?  Seriously!  Presumably this is one of those clever L-shaped movie sheets.  Seriously, this is one pair of pink feathery high-heeled slippers away from complete cliche.  I LOVE it.  I sympathize with your lack of KaPam love however there is plenty of smut love out there.  That is where you'll find success.  You pulled off the tension and the smut quite well.  Excellent!

Author's Response:

Okay. I'll admit it.

I'm completely stumped. WHAT DOES THIS COMMENT MEAN?!?!?!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Part I.

Hey, I already have KaPam love!  And I'm way ahead of you on your threats (Karen the Kidnapper, possibly the most twisted Office fanfic ever written).  You're one of those copycat criminals, aren't you?  Aren't you?!

Author's Response:

I hate to admit it, but yes. I am.

Jim is still here. He's holding a copy of today's newspaper and he's crying a little bit.

Too bad I lack compassion

Reviewer: dudski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Part I.

I don't know if I ever reviewed this when you posted it on LJ. IF I DIDN'T, I'M REALLY SORRY, I'M PRETTY MUCH THE WORST EVER AT REVIEWING, BUT ANYWAY THIS STORY IS REALLY HOT AND AWESOME AND I DON'T KNOW WHY THE PORNY PART OF FANDOM DIED.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Part I.

Actually, please write more kkthx.

Reviewer: Jordon Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Part I.

Whoa.

 

That is all.

 

 

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Part II.

Who writes the prettiest porn of all the porn? You do! :D

And I want to have sex with Pam. There. I said it.

I also wish that I could promise you KaPam, but I don't know if I can.
However, if I do write it, and it pleases me enough to post it for all the world to see...I will dedicate it to you. :) Because I know how much you love it.  

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Part II.

It just saddens me that the writers didn't let Pam & Karen be friends -- ABC was just all kinds of awesome.  Then they had to go & remove part of Karen's brain or something.

And sorry I didn't comment earlier -- I already read this on your LJ -- I sought out everything you have written already.  So write some more, would you?

Author's Response:

yes, they needed that fleshed out more. the tension between them could have been just as dynamic as between Jim and Pam, though, obviously not in a sexual way, though... ABC was odd in that way?

Lol, i'm glad you commented, but if I hope my scary pro-kapam intro didn't make you feel forced to. I get frustrated when something I'm really proud of has a 190 read count because people are too proud to give something new a try. (harumph!)

I will write more soon, once I'm done with my summer camp job. Turns out, I can't think about dirty things even when I want to/have time when I spend all day with 7 year olds.

Reviewer: beruco Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Part I.

Kelly. SO GOOD. SO GOOD KaPam!

Um. Have I seen this before? Or parts of it? Maybe posted at LJ?

Author's Response: PROBS!!! IT'S FROM LJ

Reviewer: beruco Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Part I.

MY BABY'S BACK IN THE GAME!
OMG DOES THIS MEAN WE CAN DO COLLAB AGAIN??!


Author's Response: adkgfjshdglkjsdhf!!!! COLLAB WITH YOU!!!! YESSSSS!!! Ps I was eating a tomato today and now am drunk and it all makes me think of our first glorious encounter

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Part I.

YOU'VE RETURNED!!!!!!!! :D

So excited to read Part 2! 



Author's Response:

I've spent my summer at a camp for children ages 5-11.

It's not only GUTTED my libido, but made me so tired I don't even have time to enjoy myself most nights, let alone other people's sexy sexy lives.

 PS. WHERE IS YOUR PORN WOMAN!!!! I READ YOUR PROSE AND THINGS BECAUSE I AMA GOOD PERSON, BUT SRSLY!!! I NEED YOUR FILTHY FITHY SMUT. IE PAM TOUCHING HERSELF.

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