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Reviewer: Clover Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2018 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ohmygosh, I so totally LOVE this! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time because I never knew what was going to happen next --- I LOVE being surprised at every turn! And oh, so very sweet! This has not been reviewed in over 8 years, but I hope you read this because it made me COMPLETELY happy! :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2010 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2

Kieyra, I adore this story, and I don't know how I never read it before!  It's perfect, so perfect. Not even sure if you'll see this, but I had to let you know just in case.

Reviewer: GirlFriday Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I adore this! Oh my god, so sweet. If only this were the case *sigh*

Great work! :D

Reviewer: Lee Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very, very lovely.

And this: and even if the last three years have been like the most painful high-school crush ever, the truth is you're both staring down thirty and you both know the basic steps of this dance.

is just an incredible line.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2

Yay for sneakyPam! And I love the imagery of this line:

You turn over in bed, and finally chase that single, warm memory down into sleep.

Reviewer: Lidsey Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

"The look says: Right now? You have to admit I'm fabulous."

Pam DOES have that look! Haha, this was awesome!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2006 03:28 am Title: Chapter 2

I must say, I never saw THAT coming.  It was such a great chapter.  Well written, and you are very good at building up the tension as it went on.  Awesome!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2006 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was just so utterly sweet. Great ending :)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm so glad you added the second chapter. I love second-person fics (when well-done, which this one was), and this was just so sweet, and so in-character for both of them...

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2006 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2

Loved loved loved this-you have their voices so well and I love that it was all awkwardness and uncertainty for a while. You captured what could really be Jim-Pam dialogue so well. Also love that you have her showing up at the airport in the end, it made me grin :)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2006 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, I've read the first chapter before, but I'm loving the second chapter even more! I love that Pam showed up at the airport to surprise him at the end. Sweet.
Lovely story!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2006 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

So adorable!  I love the idea of Pam taking a huge step like that, to match his.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 2

What a wonderful ending to a beautiful story. It made my heart smile.

Reviewer: Rose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2006 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

If I had my druthers, this would be exactly how it happened. Exactly--down to the very last word. 

Sweet and real and happy without forgeting all the many, many complications. This was just lovely. 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2006 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great ending. I didn't think she was gonna show up on the plane.  Great job.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2006 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the POV. And, of course, I love that JAM has a chance :)

Reviewer: MrsHalpert Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 08:44 am Title: Chapter 1

very very good! i loved it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

This really described Jim's longing so well - "You'd imagined it a thousand times. More than that. Five hundred sheets of paper to a ream, ten reams per case. Fill a truck with cases of paper and maybe you can approach the number of minutes you've spent imagining what this moment might be like."  Such a beautiful story.

Reviewer: sfaith Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Second person -- I, uh, WOW WOW WOW.  Great stuff.  Amazingly written.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1

excellent

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1

WOW -- Just beautifully written!  And it seems so realistic as well -- poignant but not over the top; dramatic but not ridiculously so.  I could totally see this as what really happened.  Great job!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Wouldn't it be nice if this was canon?  I don't think they're going to make it that easy, but this was lovely to imagine.

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this.  Thank you for writing it :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1

This had the same hushed quality as the actual Kiss.  Beautiful.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This was fantastic.  Great style.  Second person Jim is really hard to pull off but you did it brilliantly. 

Yay for second kisses.  I so hope this is the way it went after our screens went black last May.

Fingers crossed!

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