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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 25, 2009 02:52 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Oh my god, that was incredible! I have a feeling I've read this before, but I didn't review that time. So sorry about that, I love this story so much! This is great! Nice job, Lissa Maylee, what a creative idea and perfectly executed. Jan was great and I love how quickly Jim and Pam were able to forgive each other and move on. It definitely seemed like something they would do. By the way, Mr. Frank there really did scare me, I was a little nervous that they would have started dating since she said he was a really good friend.

Okay, well now I'm rambling, but I just wanted to say this was fantastic, great job and this is going into my favorites!

Reviewer: OldCrow97 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2009 01:26 am Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Whirlwind romance! I love it!

Reviewer: i_love_jam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2008 03:24 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

When Jim said, "I would have come running" my heart melted, and I couldn't stop laughing when I read "...a startled Pam in a tacky gown, a confused Jim in jeans, and half of Jan Levinson's face." I loved this, and I love your style of writing. Great job!    

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2006 10:02 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Loved this! You scared me with Frank, but all's well that ends well!

Author's Response:

Tee hee.  Frank was never a threat.  LOL

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mst3kgirl Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2006 02:00 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

I agree, NBC would never do it, but it was a cute read.  Not too sappy, and it was nice to "see" Jan.  Good work!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2006 04:39 am Title: What Happens in Vegas...

I keep thinking that when (I refuse to use if) they get together Jim could quite possibly say "Let's just fly to Vegas tonight - I don't want to wait another minute to marry you."  Your way was much more cute and creative.  Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it--I can see Jim being pretty impatient once he's sure of Pam's feelings, too.

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:48 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

So cute and funny!

Reviewer: Mel60 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:36 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

I love the note at the end. Just precious.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 07:58 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Just before he covered her lips with his own, he whispered, “I would have come running.” - that was so romantic!  I'm so glad you got them back together in the end.

Author's Response: Yes, I quite liked that image myself. :-D

Reviewer: proposals Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 12:19 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Cute! The part about Creed made me laugh out loud.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 12:08 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

Very sweet!

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 12:01 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

"No one knew what had happened to Creed." LOL

This was very cute!

 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 12:00 pm Title: What Happens in Vegas...

K that was just too cute. I loved it.

Reviewer: Em Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:35 am Title: What Happens in Vegas...

The first page in the wedding album, however, was reserved for a Polaroid featuring a startled Pam in a tacky gown, a confused Jim in jeans, and half of Jan Levinson’s face.

Wow. I think I love you.



Author's Response: Thank you, I love you, too. :-P

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2006 11:22 am Title: What Happens in Vegas...

What a fun story! And I loved the last part about the dream wedding and the album.

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