Date: September 27, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your vindictive Kelly is such a thing of beauty. I love her, and I want her to watch her rip Ryan to shreds. Her arc is so concise and eloquent, and I love that she understands exactly how to manipulate poor, unsuspecting (?) Karen. I love that Kelly knows it's wrong and kind of likes that and kind of doesn't; it's so nuanced and lovely. This story is arresting and deeply innovative. Well done.
Thank you! I love vindictive Kelly, and I hope she'll get some sort of revenge out of Ryan. If he bothers to remember that they ever dated to begin with (!)