Date: November 07, 2009 05:31 pm Title: Another Sick Day
lol. that was great. i would have liked to see more of jim and pam together, but to know they're together now is good enough. great job - and all of the office's reasons for being sick, too funny! great job!
Date: November 07, 2009 05:27 pm Title: Surveillance Work
awww! i can't believe how cute this chapter was, and dwight... just weird. mark was absolutely adorable, i loved him! but seriously, i didn't think jim and pam would start having these 'make out sessions' while she was still engaged. i thought maybe she would tell him she needed to break up with roy first and since it was monday maybe they could go out on their first date and have their first kiss on friday. just my thinking, but at least they didn't have sex while she's still with roy. all in all, great chapter, though, and that was just my way too logical brain thinking there!
Date: November 07, 2009 05:18 pm Title: The Investigation
oh my god! the last two segments of this were amazing. i LOVE 'sweetie buns' and 'tiger man' - what cute pet names, how adorable! and then, of course, i loved the part of jim and pam watching the movie on the couch, the too small blanket and falling asleep. very clever you have them subtly showing signs of an impending relationship by supposedly going to stick jim's hand in warm water and casually kissing pam's head. so beautifully well done. i can't wait to keep reading! great idea for a story, i love it. and i really hope dwight doesn't mess things up too much or find a way to spy on them through jim's window...
Date: November 07, 2009 05:09 pm Title: Conveniently Missing
aww! that was so cute, not to mention well done. i was thinking all along this was a one shot, but multiple chapters is so much better! i'm going to keep reading right now. i wonder what'll happen. any romance.... only one way to find out!
Date: March 13, 2007 05:56 am Title: Another Sick Day
I found this story incredibly funny at points, especially the end. You combined two plot points I always wanted to know more of: the Christmas card, and Jim/Pam being sick. Great job! Very creative work and a very easy read.