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Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2008 09:42 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

oh this was just angsty and painful - yay! i love post-dundies fic that includes some sex or at least making out, it's just the way the world should be ordered.  i wish this had been smuttier.  maybe a sequel - y/y???

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2007 08:02 am Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

Love this - it seems so believable to me that Jim would get confused, and then caught up in the moment - but then realize that the timing is all wrong. But them just sleeping in each others' arms was a very sweet way to get through the potential awkwardness and accept that they won't do more tonight, but soon.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2007 07:14 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

This story just feels right, you know?  Very simple, very them.  Even though he wants her desperately, he won't take advantage of her when she's had too much to drink and she's still technically engaged.  But they both are relieved and comfortable with the knowledge that they belong together and that's a happy ending.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2007 02:09 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

This was a lovely pre-Thanksgiving treat. Thank you.

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2007 08:28 am Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

*sigh*
the ending was pretty much perfect



Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2007 04:10 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

It has been a while!  I guess there is one upside to the strike if it brings SVH out of hiding with some lovely Dundie-fic.

I like how Jim admitted his less-than-noble desires to himself, but that he didn't allow their first time to be when Pam was still engaged to Roy, and drunk to boot. 



Author's Response: Maybe Jim DOES have some morals. :O!!!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2007 04:02 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

Sexy, yet warm and romantic. Very well done.  I think a lot of us have speculated as to just what might have happened had Pam not spied the camera crew that night in the parking lot of Chilis.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2007 01:38 pm Title: how virtue the cat explains her departure

Only one complaint:  I wish it wasn't over! 



Author's Response: LOL Can I just say, this was supposed to be more smut and less angst?? Didn't turn out that way, though.

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