10 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2009 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great alternate ending to Drug Testing. I didn't expect Jim go give Pam the Christmas card so that was a great surprise twist. What your wrote in the card was simple and heartfelt. I love how they communicate telepathically with each other. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, bkwrm! The funny thing is: I didn't remember the Christmas card was in this one till I read your review. Bad memory :)
Date: June 09, 2009 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Me again! This is hands down the best "guess" at what Jim wrote in the Christmas card. So sweet and simple. It made me tear up. Again.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2008 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
i thought this was gorgeous. such a sweet, imaginative moment. thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, llorin!
Date: July 11, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Drug Testing and Jinx - one of the sweetest Jim/Pam storylines for Season Two.
And that scene - you can tell me anything... you can just tell that both of them know something changed from joking to serious.
And I love the way you continued the scene and he gave her the card, and the card... awww... it was so perfect and simple and it said what it needed to say without extra words, and is just wonderful.
It was so great how they talked in thoughts.
Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks, EmilyHalpert! Glad to hear you liked it :)
Date: January 27, 2007 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. So cute. I loved Jim's thoughts. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks, flamingos!
9 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
gah why dont episodes ever go like this? this right here is what the show is lacking...
ok, its perfect...it's not their fault really
im rambling a ton..this was good is my point :)
Author's Response: Thanks, PamPongChamp :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I love how so much is said with no actual words.
Author's Response: Thanks, PuffingNoise! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2006 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great.
Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2006 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I wanted to leave you feedback here as well, because I love this fic so much. This story is totally wish fulfillment for me, because seeing the longing in Jim's eyes in Drug Testing... ack, it just kills me. You did a wonderful job with the descriptions here; the Christmas card is very well-done (in Jim's voice, not too mushy); and "You deserve to be happy" (I think) perfectly sums up Jim's feelings for Pam.
Also: "His eyes were calm, green pools. Warm and cool at once in a way she couldn’t wrap her thoughts around. She wanted to live there, in those eyes, always." Ditto!
Author's Response: Yeah...I put myself in Pam's shoes kind of a lot :) Thanks for reviewing again, neptune! I appreciate it :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2006 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Never was so much said with no words. I loved it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)