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Reviewer: BSan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 04:42 pm Title: The Proclamation

I love this!

Reviewer: lemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2008 07:58 pm Title: The Journey

I can't believe what you wrote about the afterbirth! It was funny and so Dwight! Go NA writers!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my little story, lemonade. I really appreciate it. There were some good parts to this story, and I liked how Dwight turned out, for the most part. Again, thanks for reading. NA ROCKS!!!

Reviewer: TotoDarling Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2008 10:02 am Title: Finding a Room

haha, well, it's better than anything I could write, yes? yes. I personally don't think it sucks. Honestly, I've seen MUCH worse. :)

Reviewer: Annika Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 11:09 pm Title: The Journey

Hey Daoust, great story so far!  (I'm STD on the other site, just so you know!)  You're so much fun to read, and it's really well written :)

Author's Response: Well thanks soo much for reading this. So far my predictions are holding out to be correct.  Not quite hitting home with the fanfic audience.  But now that I'll got a new ( and I think probably better ) chapter up we'll see if that draws anyone else into it. 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2007 11:13 am Title: The Journey

This is really well done. I'm not exactly sure how I feel about it, but it is interesting. By taking characters we know and putting them in this remarkable situation, it makes it easier to imagine how Mary and Joseph would have felt. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Haha, well thanks anyway, nqllisi. If this chapter were the whole story on its own, I'd be a little confused too. I admit this isn't a perfect fanfic.  I didn't fully flesh out the idea. It was very much a stream of consciousness one. But hopefully with the rest of the chapters the story finds an audience somewhere...

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