Date: January 01, 2008 08:33 pm Title: He waits until (Jim/Pam)
I've liked all of these, but this line makes this one my favorite by far:
And on the day that she says 'tie me up,' it's the fastest anyone has ever gone from "That was a really good dinner, thanks for cooking" to being so hard it hurts a little bit.
Can't wait for more!
Date: December 31, 2007 11:50 am Title: How and where (Karen/Ryan/Vibrator)
OK Forget what I said about the Karen/Hunter chapter being my favorite. That fourth paragraph-- the put together girl losing control, feeling her come, clutching, cursing... Thanks for the girl bone.
and you can pick how and where and what position.
Date: December 30, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Getting really hot in the summer (Kelly/Dwight)
Okay, I've now read all of of them so far, and is it weird that this one is my favorite? Lumberjack Dwight... disgustingly hot. Or it's at least #2 after Jim/Pam/Begging because dear god I'm now melting inside my skin.
Date: December 29, 2007 06:15 am Title: Things that make it not so awful (Pam/Vibrator)
ooh - this one is super.
For the record: I'd bone undelicate Roy in a heartbeat.
of course! who wouldn't?
Date: December 28, 2007 03:04 pm Title: Fight or flight or just give in (Jim/Ryan)
Jim's going to wish he got the pleather apholstery in his Saab instead of the cloth. I like how you work in the homo-eroticism in the first paragraph (Jim noticing Ryan's lips and hair)
I know everyone reacts differently to slash, but the cross-jerkoff car image basically gave me one of those happy, sinister laughs that are so enjoyable.
Date: December 28, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Good boys don't think about that (Jim/Himself)
Wanking-Jim just plays so realistically to me. I doubt any dude can really lie to himself with his hand wrapped around his dick. And I've always pegged him a sworn breast man (or else he'd have hung onto Karen hard) so his titty-fuck fantasy... bullseye. I also see he conveniently doesn't imagine his pearls hitting Pam's face/eyes/hair, etc.
He's seen his share of porn, and he knows that girls who look like Karen don't (can't) wrap their breasts around a guy's dick.
At least not after that first, humbling attempt. :)
Author's Response: You delight me, darling. Totally and completely. <3
Date: December 27, 2007 11:09 pm Title: Things that make it not so awful (Pam/Vibrator)
Tee hee. I love your stories. I know you gave us the Jim and Pam ones first not to scare us away! Come on, we can take it. I am looking forward to the rest. :)
Author's Response: Ha ha ha! You're totally on to me! Don't worry, I have many, many more pairings (and a few more Jim/Pam because that's what happens when you ask Office fans to submit pairings. ;)
Date: December 27, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Good boys don't think about that (Jim/Himself)
Oooh! Continue please. These are short and to the filthy point. Just the way it should be sometimes.
Author's Response: HA! YES! This review is the exact reason that these were written in the first place! Sometimes you just need a hint of filth to get...things going.
Date: December 27, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Things that make it not so awful (Pam/Vibrator)
For the record: So would I. I like these pairings and I'm also a fan of your other stories. Keep up the good work!
Especially if he was all bearded, but even if he wasn't. I just like the fact that if I hugged Roy, I'd basically disappear in his arms. There's something so cute and protective about that. I do love Roy, he tried so hard in all the wrong ways.
Glad you liked it! And the other stories! I'm hoping that being out of creative writing class this upcoming semester will allow me more time to write (NOT for a grade!)