1 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2022 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite endings on the archive!
Date: September 10, 2010 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant ending, like getting whipped cream on a hot chocolate when you're ot expecting it, bonus sweetness.
Date: February 12, 2009 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice ending, unexpected.
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooh that really surprised me, what a fantastic ending!!!
Date: June 07, 2008 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this fic...I feel a little stupid that I couldn't see an ending like that coming. Usually I can spot those, but you hid it very well! I'll definitely be reading more of your work!
Date: January 30, 2008 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! Nice twist!! I was really not expecting that. Wow!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa!!!! Did not see that last line coming! Way to spring a surprise ending! *applause*
Date: March 04, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was just browsing through things and saw this - loved it!!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
ok, that was great....I just loved the twist at the end, great job!
Date: January 21, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hehe this is awesome! The twist at the end! I did not see it coming (which is the point, I suppose) :P Thanks so much!! Adding it to my favorites!!
Date: January 16, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha, i love that ending
Date: January 11, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha, what a twist -- I definitely didn't see that coming! Really nice job with this challenge.
Date: December 27, 2006 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it. *awesome*.
Date: December 09, 2006 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, if only, TV Buffy!!!! This is really inventive -- sorry I missed it for so long!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2006 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I forgot about this one and I never reviewed it. This story rocks. I loved it.
6 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
*snort* That was a great ending!
Oh Pam, please don't marry Roy. For our sakes.
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow.... Jim's sister! Awesome.
I loved that line: "Jim fucking Halpert..." hahaha. That is another variation on Roy's "What the fuck, Pam?" Great job!
Author's Response: Hee. I had to totally delete "Wat the fuck, Pam?" about three times. So, that line had to suffice.
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I really didn't see that coming! Really wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you were surprised.
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 06:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh! Sooo awesome! Yay for Jim's big sis! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad Jessica is nosy!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh...
This reminds me of the town I live in. Always need to watch what you say and where you say it, you never know whose brother/sister/aunt/unle/baby mama is listening.
Jessica seems nosey, lol.[/sarcasm] Her and Jims conversation.... that's one I woud love to read.
I loved this, by the way.
Author's Response: My hometown was the same way. Everyone was related. Thanks for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hee hee! Yay for siblings! Brilliant story! I like the whole "outsiders perspective" of it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome reveal!! I really enjoyed the unusual POV, and then that twist totally took me by surprise! I love the idea of Jim having an older sister, and this worked really well. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! Poor Jim needs a ton of protective people around him, doesn't he? Thanks for reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! Loved the twist at the end, though this whole story is a great balance of sadness for Pam & Roy and happiness for Pam & Jim. Loved the Pam/Roy conversation.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad the balance worked - I tried to be delicate to all parties involved.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That. Rules. I so did not see that coming, but it's perfect! Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome twist! Totally didn't see it coming--I was just enjoying an outside look on the situation. I liked having a different POV. But great ending.....
Author's Response: Thanks! I liked both things about it, too. It's always good to have that outside perspective.