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Reviewer: Rose Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dude! This ending blew my mind.

Wonderful job. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! So glad you liked the story and the ending!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fun twist at the end! But poor Roy. Oh, well!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heh...good story.  People have no idea what we tellers hear, do they?  Oh, the stories I could tell, if it wasn't for that pesky "financial privacy" thing.  Great story, great ending...loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you for responding. I was afraid I was doing a disservice to tellers everywhere. Glad to hear it was somewhat realistic. :)

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Didn't expect that at the end, loved it :)

Author's Response: Happy to hear you enjoyed the ending. Thanks for leaving feedback!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that was awesome! Great dialogue for Pam/Roy, great inner monologue for the teller.

And the reveal!  Rock on. Loved it ;)



Author's Response: Thanks, nomadshan. Thanks for commenting on the dialogue - I get nervous about characterization.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, zing! Good one, TV_Buffy!


Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the story! Appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh snap! This was fun. :)

Author's Response: Hee. Thanks!

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great ending! You got me. I loved all of Jessica's speculation about Pam and Roy.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked Jessica and her thoughts!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Woo! Wonderful way to end it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Didn't see that ending coming.  Great! 

Author's Response: Glad you were suprised. Thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

That was great! What a cute surprise at the end.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

I think this story really turned out great.  I have a lot of love for the ending.  Awesome. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your help (and feedback). The ending is near and dear to my hear as well. Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was wonderful. I love your twist at the end.

Author's Response: Thanks for you feedback! Glad you liked the ending.

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