1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 This Armor's Really Starting to Itch
Really wish you had gone further with this, but both POVs are excellent.
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 This Armor's Really Starting to Itch
You've really shown an understanding of Pam's frustration with Roy and why she was turning to Jim. I really enjoyed it! Keep going!
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
You have really portrayed Jim's frustration, in wanting Pam but being able to have her, perfectly! I love your writing style. Keep going!
Date: January 24, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 This Armor's Really Starting to Itch
I like this story, MTT. I like it a lot. Don't be hasty with chapter 3, my friend. I want them to talk it out.
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 This Armor's Really Starting to Itch
Hey, great chapter! I especially liked the way you explained how she became so self protective. And her mother being the voice of reason was a great touch, since we know just how much she adores her. Great job, and I can't wait for updates!
Date: January 21, 2008 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
Well done, MTT. May this be only the beginning of your long journey into fanfic writing!
Date: January 20, 2008 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
love it, cant wait to read more!
Date: January 20, 2008 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
This is great, mtt! I can't wait to see what else you come up with.
9 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
Wow. Really great start! "(an activity which required her to hold his hand, so...bonus!)" Love that--very Jim.
Date: January 20, 2008 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
Ski--This is really interesting. I've read a few post-"The Fight" stories, but almost all of them feature bright-&-sunny Pam the next day. I like the tension you established between them, and you've also done a great job with Jim's inner-monologue. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more! -CH
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Becky. That's high praise coming from the author of a story as brilliant as 'All Inclusive'! I'm having a problem, though. I've been trying to edit the chapter (I totally forgot that 'The Fight' takes place on Friday!) and my changes don't get saved. Any advice?
Date: January 19, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
I'm definitely intrigued. This is thought provoking. I never thought Pam had much of a case to be mad at Jim here, and I definitely think holding the grudge the next day would be excessive...maybe you have a different spin, though. Looking forward to the next part.
Date: January 19, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Morning After a Weekend with Jack
I love it so far! You're really capturing Jim's angst very well. Can't wait to read more.