Date: February 01, 2008 08:40 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
oh my god.
you WOULD end a chapter like that!
It was beautiful,
so hurry & put the next one up, okay?
good.
glad we got that taken care of.
:)
Author's Response: Haha! Sorry! It's just seemed like a good ending point! Don't worry! The next chapter is on it's way!
Date: February 01, 2008 05:02 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
Plese don't make us wait too long before your next update. I am so happy Pam woke up. BTW the cheesier the better for me!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 04:25 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
This chapter was beautiful! Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!! It shouldn't be too long.
Date: February 01, 2008 04:24 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
oh yay...pam is finally awake...can't wait to see what happens now with her and him!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 07:02 am Title: Moments last....
I'm enjoying this story a lot - can't wait for the next chapter, but the last line? "It's our turn" is way, WAY cheesier than "You're the only one for me". Maybe its because I'm a guy or not American or something but that made me cringe! Don't worry though, its still a good story so no offense.
Author's Response: Every line I thought of was cheesy! Trust me....I tried like 50 different things and they were all cheesy!! Finally I just picked one and went with it!!
Date: February 01, 2008 06:31 am Title: In my haste I left you behind..
Perfect note with the flowers. Looking forward to more.
Date: February 01, 2008 05:27 am Title: Moments last....
aww loved it...i am loving jim more and more and i didn't think that was possible!! i don't quite understand jon's part in the story...is he just a filler character or is he going to have a bigger part?? just wondering!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: Jon is Jim's brother. He's mostly just a filler. I thought that Jim needed someone to be there for him. He might come back for a little bit, but I don't know.
Date: January 31, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Moments last....
I love this story! It's so great! Totally weird about the grocery store...I live in Scranton and I have never in my life seen or heard of Scott's! I even googled it!! lol
Author's Response: It's a real place right!?!?! I mapquested it and everything!!
Date: January 30, 2008 07:40 pm Title: Hope has a place....
so good...can't wait for more...love how her family rallies around jim and just shot roy down!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I considered having Jim punch Roy, but I figured it would hurt him more to have her and her family write him off. Thanks for the review!!
Date: January 30, 2008 06:57 pm Title: Hope has a place....
This is your first story? You've done a great job. I've really enjoyed reading the first 5 chapters. Keep them coming. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this is my first one. I'm glad you like it!!
Date: January 30, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Hope has a place....
great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Hope has a place....
Wow! I'm loving this story. I had a feeling that they got in a wreak because Pam told Roy about Casino Night. I can't wait for Jim to break up with Karen and for Pam to wake up. You definitely seem to be update very quickly. Do you already have the story written? Just curious.
Author's Response: Not it's not all written yet. I just have lots of ideas and want to get them down before I forget!! Glad you like it! I appreciate the reviews!!
Date: January 30, 2008 06:37 am Title: In my haste I left you behind..
Just read this one and can't wait for more. Hurry!!!
Date: January 29, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Restless for a sign....
This chapter was so heartwrenching -- angsty goodness. =)
Date: January 29, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Wondering and Waiting
Awww, that was a very touching scene between Jim and Mrs. Beesly.
Date: January 29, 2008 09:46 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
Oooh poor Pam!! Really nice start, looking forward to reading more. =)
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2008 08:52 pm Title: Restless for a sign....
This story is exactly what I wanted to read tonight. For a first attempt at fanfic, it's really good ;-) You have great pacing. Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! Your comment means a lot!!
Date: January 29, 2008 07:26 pm Title: Restless for a sign....
ohhh my gosh...so good...can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: January 29, 2008 05:17 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
You did a great job of conveying Jim's emotion. The end really makes you picture his heart stopping in his throat.
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved your story, so your comment means a lot! Glad you liked it!
Date: January 29, 2008 04:51 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
I like where this is heading.. Please continue soon!
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2008 04:21 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
:O MORE PLEASE!!
Date: January 29, 2008 04:11 pm Title: In my haste I left you behind..
Can't wait to read the next chapter!